A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.
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You've always admired Princess Twilight's newest student... from a distance. Just about every little thing she did made you smile, if only on the inside.
But, one evening, during one of your calming walks: you discover her alone in the forest, beside your favourite lake.
And... is she... crying?
Now with an amazing YouTube Reading by Sparrow 9264.
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Seems like it could be good will read it later
I love it, keep up the awesome work!
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Thanks!
I just spotted this. I will check it out later
I resent that comment about cake strangling! That was one time and there were extenuating circumstances!
but seriously, im loving the story
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I'm glad to hear it. Thanks!
That was so cute!!!
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D'aww, thanks!
Well this was certainly nice haven't read that many starlight glimmer stories but i liked this one
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Thanks!
This was cute, I love it! ( ﾟヮﾟ)
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Awww I really liked this story! I don't often get to read 2nd person romance fics, but I'm glad I did here! This was really cute! It's comforting to see characters we like get to be happy, because we get to be happy through them. :)
Nice reference to the episode where one of the salesponies tries to charge Fluttershy twenty bits for a cherry :P
Awww...I was wondering why that particular color combination. :)
(In-love with Spitfire) I brought you some fire flowers!
*Spitfire eats one and starts shooting fire out of her mouth*
Aw I really like these descriptions that help you, the reader, see what Anon sees in Starlight.
AHHHHHH this is exactly how it works. :D (You're making me want to write my own story > .< )
I really enjoy that the connection wasn't instant. You show how things develop over time and allow the relationship to naturally bloom. I think the the human mind needs this to some extent so the situation can be believable and thus enjoyed a lot more.
I'D LIKE TO SEE THE FEASIBILITY OF THIS XD
Just trying to figure out how this works is a great mind game :P
*GASP* a mention of my bae <3
That is really sweet, though, that Vinyl is such a fan of pony Anon's music. :)
Oh well that's good. XD
HAH I love self-aware moments like this. It's good to allow the readers to laugh at the character every once in a while to prevent things from getting "too sappy" :P
Awww. This says a lot about Anon pony's background too, which a lot of people can relate to.
This is a WONDERFUL moment, because it shows how sweet Anon is and allows the reader to experience a sweet moment that really connects two individuals together. This is realistic and it is beautiful for it <3 <3
Yes, in order for Anon to truly feel connected to her, he must empathize with her and what she's been through. Good that she explained to him everything, but also good that you summarized it through Anon, see pretty much almost anyone who reads this would already know Starlight's backstory. Nice shortcut, there!
Capitalized "You're" :P
Awww! I didn't even consider that unicorns might use magic to show nervous tics. That's cute!
SCORE! Unless they play Ponyopoly. Then they will HATE each other by the end of the night XD
What a cute story! :D I really liked it.
Fav'd and upvoted! :D
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Thank you once more for the review, and I'll fix that typo ASAP.
And if you want to see the resolution to it all, feel free to check out part two~!
Cute! Mind if I do a reading of this on my youtube channel. You'd get full credit, and I'd link you it once it's done.
Why am I just NOW reading this!?
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You've just now noticed it.
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(Amethyst, you'd better say yes to this person 'cause this story is good!)
Yes he'll do it sparrow!
(You better say yes!)
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Already have.
7662616 *coughs nervously*
OH um okay, yeah
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You're fine. It's actually beyond flattering.
One of the best romance stories I've read on this site. Great job!
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Really? Wow, thanks!
This is a cute fluff-fic! ;D
Well... Can't believe it took me this long to get to this.(wow I suck...) This beats any fluff I write although I'm still not use to 2ND POV. But ignoring that, it was a nice read.
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No, you don't suck, you've been busy: and it's also taken me quite a while to get around to fics I'd like to read.
Nevertheless, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
7769687 No problem. It just sucks that I made a promise and I failed to full fill it with the time I wanted. Regardless, this deserves more love.
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I know what you mean. But: a promise kept past the sands of time is better than a promise not kept at all.
Aw, this was super cute so far! I'm loving it!
And for some weird reason, I thought that you- well, I was Anon.
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Thanks!
And yeah, we are Anon: that's the point of 2nd Person.
7943885 Ya, just finished reading the second chapter. I loved how it went!
(with this comment, I was thinking Anon the human though 
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
(Oh, ok.)
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That is all.
I Love This Story So Much Everytime I Read It ^^ Thanks For Makin A YouXStarlight Fic There Are Basically None And This Is To Me The 1st :3 Hope Ya May Make Another ;D XD
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Thank you! I'm glad,
And there is a sort-of sequel out now, if you want to take a look. Though it doesn't involve Starlight.
8107378 I Saw That Was Awesome To ;3 Though... Needs More Starlight XD JK JK ...Or Am I?
Brilliant story, will satisfy the romantic cravings of men and women.
This fic satisfies me so much, good word choices, the story, the shipping, the dialogue. Just perfect.
Couldn't ask for more.
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Thank you!
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How did I not see this until now?
Anyways, thanks!
Though I'm a little confused. I didn't release the 2nd person romance for women until a month after this comment was posted..?
Loved it! Very powerful, yet, romantic! More please!
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Oh, I have a couple more.
Man this is beautiful for a beautiful like Starlight Glimmer she's my top favorite character that's not in the mane six
Very sweet story, loved it!
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Thanks.
Hello I as wondering if i can make a dramatic reading on this story to YouTube if your ok with that?
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I don't mind, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Amen to that.
Here’s what needs to happen (in my honest opinion) 🤞🤞🤞
A direct sequel to this story, or a retelling of this story but from Starlight’s P.O.V. (still told in third person, obviously; but you get the point.)
Easily one of my favorite stories