A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.
This story is a sequel to A Glimmer in her Eye
You've always chased one dream, one goal in life... to be a hero. You've worked for it day in and day out, and it has cost you so much that it's starting to worry those around you. Two mares in particular seem especially frightened as they each grow closer to you.
Two Mares, Two Memories, One Love.
Whom will you choose?
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I noticed one thing that caught my attention
but other than that I like it I'm curious of where your going with this 
and depending on the next chapter I will comment on pacing but it could work * shrugs * but I like the dynamic you set Redheart and Rainbow I kinda curious on which one he will choose.
I'll wait for that next chapter 
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What was it?
dis is great yes, much approve.
:)
Amazing chapter
Amazing! Just, Amazing!
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Thank you.
Very cute story with a pretty uncommon pone. I feel like it could have used a chapter giving a little more detail of the twos interactions to build the romance a bit more it but other than that a very satisfying read.
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Thank you, and thanks for the feedback!
I think I might add a bonus chapter later on about the time spent in the hospital...
Loved it
There's not enough Redheart romance stories out there.... thanks for filling that void!