Everyone remembers how the CMC accidentally let Discord free from his stone cold prison. But that was their only cameo in the whole episode. Where were they for the rest of the episode? If Celestia was all afraid of Discord's return, then where was Luna? Wouldn't she be all paniced with her sister? Find out in this story of the other side of 'The Return of Harmony'
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Grammar is very bad here. "Looking back behind her to see if her sister noticed how ruder her remark was. Celestia was to distracted with her own problems to have noticed." It should be Looking back behind her to see if her sister noticed how rude her remark was, she saw that Celestia was too distracted with her own problems to have noticed. Or something like that. It's only 1 example. There's other mispellings as well.
4031892 sorry for that!! I am in school now so I can't correct it right now but I will get to it soon! No hard feelings?
4033293 K. Just get to it when ya can.
"Whom are thou talkest of?" Asked an even more concerned Luna.
"Would you just shut up! No pony in this time even talks like that!! Where you raised in a barn!?" Yelled Celestia. Fire was burning in her eyes.
I happen to think she talks awesome.
4033293 more!!!
4044139 I think she talks awesome too!! I have no school tomorrow so I will try to write more.
4055860 oh. I interpreted that the crusaders with there fight freed him. I got this idea from Bride of Discord. Do u understand what my intant was? I am not trying to not seem mean or anything!!
4056699 I am not trying too.This story is till in progress and later I am going to show how many of the characters that were not seen in the episode ended up playing big roles in the background. I will try to have the next chapter up by tonight to try to display that.
I dont think the fourth wall can handle two creatures who can defy the laws of physics.
4072658 ts meant for comedy value! At least I explained and expanded more on the CMC on Discord's escape!
4072856 t'was kidding.
4045219 USE MICROSOFT WORD!!!!! And get a proofreader while you're at it. Fix up the grammar beforehand.
4072856 WHY DON'T YOU FIX UP YOUR GRAMMAR WITH MICROSOFT WORD? IK! Because you are lazy and don't give a darn about grammar which will cause you many dislikes.
4084141 first off I have only gotten two dislikes and second calm the fuck down!!
4084317 Give it time. You'll see. I like the idea. It's a VERY EXCELLENT idea. I said that you will get many dislikes. You said you only HAVE 2 dislikes. Have is a present tense, and will is a future tense. They don't unite.
JohnHoly, please have some respect.
Thanks for 300 views on this story!! Its really great you guys take the time to read this