This story is a sequel to Wherein the Main Character is an Alicorn OC
Darkness Awesome has settled down to a life as a family stallion with his lovely wife Princess Luna and harem of supporting Mane 6 minus Pinkie Pie. He is happy with where events have taken him and feels his days of adventuring are over.
His son, Shadow Incredible, wants to go out adventuring instead of being cooped up at home. He is tired of the life of ease and wants to make his mark on the world. His dad, however, being the classic self-insert father of Scootareader's past, doesn't want Shadow Incredible to put himself in danger.
Will Shadow Incredible be able to buck the authority of his father and save Equestria from impending doom? Well, he wouldn't be a very good protagonist if he didn't, so probably!
This story will contain some profane language, most notably the word badass. If you've even looked at the original fic, you'll understand just how crucial this word is for character development.
This is set about a week after the events of Wherein the Main Character is an Alicorn OC. If you haven't read that yet, this won't be nearly as entertaining. Finally, an OC that contains red.
Damn it, downvotes are already winning.
Well, this fic is a bust.
Well your grammar and spelling seem to be in check... so it means that you took some effort in writing this trollfic.
Other than that I nothing else to say.
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I'm actually an editor, and it angers me incessantly to see other people with things misspelled, so I'd hope that I have great spelling and grammar.
This isn't a trollfic; it's a satire. Trollfics are stories intended to irritate others under the guise of being written by a bad author, whereas a satire is created to poke fun towards something--in this case, I made a satire of alicorn OC stories, then I made the shitty sequel that's required to make an alicorn OC story truly great, still within the satire.
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I like you. You're a good friend.
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Oh okay.
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I have never seen a more honest title.
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You did it again Scoots....
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The sequel was a requirement. No shitty alicorn OC fic is complete without its shitty follow-up sequel.
4000545 Indeed my friend....
so awsum
bro u shuld writ boks
u wil get rich i tell u.
Cassandra doesn't take pleasure in being harsh like that, but someday Shadow will thank her for that valuable life lesson. I laughed, I cried, the story touched me. I applaud your decision to keep Worst Pony Applejack out of the story.
Faved for funny story.
Downvoted for no Applejack.
Neutral face for Cassandra ref.
Wow, that's weird...
Wow, it's so buggeringly awful yet so amazing!
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What if I told you... I already had?
You're right, I wouldn't believe me either.
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Please notice me Cassandra-sensei ;_;
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Thanks to this fic, the original is now about even on upvotes/downvotes, too. No one can tell if it's good or bad.
Thank you for the downvote. At least the readers can decide it's bad now.
EDIT: Nope, it's at 19/19 now. WHY.
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4001842 Why's it on 19/19? 'Cause I voted it up...
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I'll let you in on a little secret - you're the only story to get a Fave-Dislike from me.
Oh! Crud! Don't forget the unfinished threequel that the author gave up on halfway due to lack of interest/shifting priorities/unexplained reason #33028476!
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Well, don't I feel special.
You're correct; this isn't done yet. I'll write the half-finished threequel when I'm feeling up to writing this crap again.
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And make it a self-insert. Like, you were birthed from the relations of Shadow Incredible, Luna, Rarity, Darkness Awesome, a substantial rift in space-time, and a wormhole in two parallel universes all at once in separate instances because f**k you, or something like that.
When you're into writing this again, I wanna read it!
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I already have the idea for the third fic and just need to write it.
Well, I just wrote the story page on it.
I really like that, actually. Yeah, you got good ideas.
Stay tuned and we'll see just how cringingly bad I can make it.
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E-e-e-e-excellent.
I should really add a new chapter to What the Heck now.
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Methinks Scootareader has daddy issues. Serious daddy issues.
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How did you know?
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Cassandra told me.
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Oh. Well, I don't think she would benefit from lying or anything, so I believe her.
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4001842 Jesus Christ, Scoots, don't tell me you watch Gravity Falls!! I love that show
! Or did you just get the vid?
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I've seen portions of it, including the first episode. That's on the list, right after Adventure Time (of which I'm currently on season 3). Did you know that Merriwether Williams, one of the writers for Friendship is Magic (and worst Spike writer in existence), also writes for Adventure Time? I didn't until I saw her name in one of the credits sequences!
4577621 Huh, cool! How is Adventure Time? I've heard lots about it.
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. . . . . . . . wat?
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Just keep going. Four left.