This story is a sequel to The Cassandra Chronicles
This is Cassandra, my OC don't steal. Her interests include having a dark past, saving Twilight when the elements of harmony fail, and being Celestia's long-lost sister. She is the seventh element, the Element of Trust, because she has to learn to put trust in less-intelligent, less-reliable ponies, and other ponies have to realize they should trust her.
What's a mare to do when two of her friends simultaneously confess their love for her? On Hearts and Hooves Day, Cassandra's natural beauty proves to be more of a curse than a gift when her glimmering radiance enamors both Rarity and Rainbow Dash. She's saved the world countless times, but can she save herself from hurting her friends' feelings? I don't know, but I do know that Cassandra's stories are the best stories.
Glory to Cassandra.
I love this more than my own skin.
This is the greatest masterpiece I have ever laid eyes upon.
ALL GLORY TO CASSANDRA
This wasn't actually that bad, depending on how you see it. Most OC inserts are discouraged, but I found yours well written and generally funny, if that was what you were going for.
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So, basically all of Equestria is filled with simpletons and scumbags, from your point of view.
This OC bears an uncanny resemblance to the 'breathtakingly beautiful' writer of this fic, doesn't she?
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I now have accumulated enough nope for about three years. Yaay.
Very nice. Liked the oc and the story.
3946735 It's 3am here and I'm high on soggy cornflakes. Not exactly at the prime of my mental faculties at the moment.
3946747 He gets it
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"Oh hai, Rarity. I didn't know it was you."
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Much faith in humanity has been restored, now that I know this IS a parody. Many a time I have read a story, thinking it was meant to be a parody, only to find out the author was being serious. (or at least, attempting to be)
Just from that description alone.
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3947573 More or less, yeah.
What? She actually said Gasp?!
Interesting.... Sounds like she's not very good at protecting ponies. I finally found a flaw!!
My hero!!
That... Was actually really funny!!
Well, that was certainly.... Interesting... Personally, I don't really like your OC. She's WAY to perfect. I don't really agree with 3946747 because this so-called "parody" isn't played for laughs. I really can't enjoy this because even if it's SUPPOSED to be a parody, it doesn't really do that very well. Instead, everyone basks in in Cassandra's glory, and she takes it all in. She KNOWS she is perfect, and she says she is. This isn't funny. The story line is okay, but the actual story is WAY to quick. You didn't really develop anything..... Now.... Onto the "climax". I didn't like the sex scene. This REALLY could have been more descriptive. It didn't interest me in the slightest. Overall, this story was rushed, what was supposed to make me laugh didn't, and it weakened the story, and the sex scene wasn't really interesting.
HOWEVER!!!!!! I truly believe that you can work on this and make it SO much better. A little editing might be needed, and definitely some more description. Plus, make your OC a bit less.... perfect/ Mary Sueish. Have some flaws. Instead of her fixing the 'problem' with Twi, have Twi give her advice, and have her ponder her thoughts. Then have the two run into her when she hasn't made up her mind. Have them force her to make up her mind.... Leading to The Scene. Hope this helps!!
-Derpy 2
4163742 I wanted to keep the sex to a Teen rating, and I didn't think I could make it anymore steamy for that.
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Let me get this straight.
Cassandra's apparently loved by THREE ponies, all of whom seemed OOC?
Apparently, she's Celestia's long-lost sister??
AND she's got a "flawless mane, and eyes that shined like stars"???
I sense a Mary Sue...
Also, I agree COMPLETELY with what Derpyx2, Jarkes, and AngryMadmoth said.
4323491 thanks for zoom,
What is that .1 font?
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The mystery may never be solved...
4608835 really? *eye roll*
I can be a little half late to be commenting on this Fic, but fuck it, I'll say my opinion anyway.
First of all: Man, I love fillyfooling. Fillyfoolers are awesome, and as a lesbian myself, I almost just ship FxF ships. But that? That is a shame for who like fillyfooling like me. I mean, what the flying fuck is that? Second: Well, we have all the elements for chaos:
Mary Sue OC - check!
Two characters loving this OC - check!
At least one of the lovers of this OC is, for the author, the best pony! - check!
Some people may like this, I don't. Note: 4,30/10
More luck next time,
~Spectrum Shine
(Note 4,30 because grammar is kinda good)
5215744 This story is an obvious joke, as are the rest of the "My OC Cassandra" chronicles. Don't bother pointing out the story's flaws because the author knows them full well and is using them to poke fun at other stories. Seriously, don't let yourself fall for it.
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