This story is a sequel to A Mother's Wish
For centuries a certain alicorn has been trapped in another dimension, living quietly, and avoiding being seen by the human eye. When she finally found a way home, her spell went wrong, and it pulled a human consciousness in with her.
That said, consciousness is me, Alex. I woke up one day, only to discover that I had turned into a pony, but I didn't turn into just any pony. I became a pony known as Lauren Faust, the mother to Celestia and Luna. Now I’m living in the Canterlot castle; I have a bunch of royals acting like children, changelings running around, and an ancient alicorn prankster stuck inside my head. All I can say is things get a little hectic.
Prequel is an optional side story.
Rewrite/Return to FimFiction.
You can find the original story HERE
Big thanks to STTPStudio for creating a reading of this story.
Loooool??!!
This is a well done fiction... I give it at least 8.5/10 so far. Not sure if there is going to be more chapters.
yay
Its nice to see this story back.
Interesting,I hope this continues.
Nice to see that this story has continued and in a new way too!
I seriously just gasped!
It's back!
I am glad to see this once-forgotten story finally get an update.
However, is this a re-write chapter? Because I found some discrepancies in the first half of the chapter. (and I cannot remember the original one.)
It might be the cultural thing, but how could Lauren know his real name without him telling her? From what I understand, Alex does not always be a shorten name.
Alex is too knowledgeable for someone who only know MLP just by being forced to watch some episodes. There is no way he would know a meme of the character without being a certain level of fan himself.
YES!! OUR CREATOR HAS RETURNED
More pls
I remember this. I could never find it again, the original anyway.
Nice! I never read the original, so everything in this is fresh for me. I want more already!
Great chapter, I look forward to the next!
(I can foresee a great many instances of Alex saying the ponies are stupid, intellectually. The probable excuse would be that her standards for a species' baseline intelligence were raised by the long time in the human world.)
How long was Lauren in the human world for anyway? Lifetimes? A few hundred years? A few thousand? Not very clear, though going by the first bit, a few hundred, and that would translate to the thousands with asynchronous time between universes.
kek that ending.
Oh My Celestia!! This is such a cute little story. PLEASE write more for this. I really wanna see where this story goes!
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Maybe he saw more episode or clips of them but refuse to acknowledge them even to himself (he is in negation or how some people say Closet brony
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,as for the memes , bump into memes is is almost unavoidable,(is a real life fact for me at least
Not gonna lie, you hooked me with the dust bomb.
SWETT BABY RAY'S BARBECUE, YOU'RE BACK!
Good to see you!
Welcome back. Don't remember what i felt about this story but will give it a read.
I liked the original and was sad to see it go. I guess I'll read this, probably after several chapters are up though.
Holy crap I remember reading the original version of this story. I never thought I'd see it again.
Nice to see this return. i notice with the rewrite Lauren didn't plan on a human host so abit less dickish on her part. and the reason she is small is because she is depowered right now?
It took the Royal Guards 3 days to find everyone inside the throne room, 4 years later and they still can't find Currency.
That was so stupid.. I love it.
Well, at least he did a rewrite.
Why'd you remove the story in the first place, anyways?
ngl, the end of this chapter made me laugh so hard i cried XD
yeeees
Me gusto el capítulo espero que sigas subiendo más capítulos (no se Inglés y aún así estoy leyéndolovon Google traductor :P)
Yay!!! Its back!!
super cool
To quote from Six Queens, by Princess OtakuGeek
... I dunno. Sounds a bit Mcdoofy to me!
Since I've already read the old story, is it worth re-reading it again? How much of a rewrite it is anyway?
For anyone wondering, previous versions can be found here:
https://fimfetch.net/story/279908/since-when-am-i-faust
Or even an older revision here:
http://svimik.com/fimfiction/?sort=name&search=since-when-am-i-faust
Though I'm not sure if it's the same story, that one was written by The Otaku Architect.
I just hope that this time they will succeed when negotiating with Chrysalis
Hiver's Page could do that when being just a unicorn, why not Alex and Lauren as alicorn
Worth it.
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Same person. Read the description.
I really liked the ending
Also it's surprisingly rare to have a displaced human who doesn't cry like a drama queen paragraphs after paragraphs.
You got my attention
Discord would beg to differ
Piece of paper
Why would he need money to go to a pool in his house? Or unless he's gonna build it
I remember this story! I loved it when it was still up! Glad to hear your back!
Hello everyone, thank you for all the comments and support. I may not reply to every comment but I read them all and leave a 👍 when I’ve seen it.
10479004 10479274 10479457 10479491 10479134 There shall be more! 👍
10479978 To put it bluntly, I felt like it was pressure or a job that I had to do. And I could never find a good way to continue the story the way it was headed. So I figured, at the time at least, that the best course of action would be to get rid of it. And from there my delete happy ways just ran rampant. The only copy I had left was what I forgot on Grammarly.
10479091 10479156 10479192 10479216 10479641 10479673 10480114 Thanks, I’m glad to be back.
10479215 10479523 10480603 10480623 10480633 Good point, thanks for the catch, I appreciate it.
10479835 Yeah, to me it was just too cruel, so that’s why I scrapped that storyline. It didn’t add anything to it either. As to Lauren’s size, I’m hoping to have her start out as normal size and gradually get taller.
10480192 Edit: Now that I've been going through the chapters I've been changing a bit more than I originally anticipated. So it's up to you.
The first three chapters are based on what I already had. And I’m tweaking them, and removing pointless filler, along with shoehorned jokes that made no sense. At least the ones I noticed, I have a bad habit of skipping over some paragraphs.
Secondly, dude how did you find this! I couldn’t find this I’ve been looking for a while now... And thirdly, if you read this story on here way back when I shared a photo of a project I was building. I can take a picture of it to prove my credentials.
It's back baby! I have bookmarked the Fimfetch of this and still give it a reread every few months. I am smiling so hard right now.
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Cool still glad it is back
Glad you're getting back in to finish this amazing story.
Hope your inspiration lasts long and stays healthy!
GOOD LUCK!!!
10480987 Thanks
Ahh, I missed this, and I am so glad you included the dust bomb in this chapter
hype!!!