Five years have passed after the war with the Changelings, an era of peace ushered in. The sun is shining, the birds singing...and the palace lively with two very mischievous fillies. Now with more borscht!
7053445 probably me not paying attention to proper wording. I was aiming for the old fashioned way of saying he was banging the palace staff. Ill fix it today. How are you enjoying the story so far?
7053519 the conclusion of this arc will be posted very soon. I'm actually in a mood to write again, and I'm not twatblocked by writers block anymore. (Finally. ) so it will continue to be updated regularly now. Dont worry, still a few more chapters before book 3 will be out.
Could you please review and post your thoughts on the chapter? I can't improve without having feedback from readers.
7053537 I enjoyed the chapter the only things I found strange were the guy who damaged the wing and how fast everyone accepted the herd idea. The plane is the newest tech for them so I would think they would have better recruits than the asshat who damaged the wing. And as far as the herd it just seems fast.
7058846 it never left, I was just too busy and distracted to post or update. That said, tjose problems are solved and I am writing again. So? What's your thoughts on the chapter? Reviews always help me improve and motivate me to write.
7059601 hmmm well one thing that kind of bothered me was the repetitive themes of certain (in danger) scenarios but you actually kind of pulled this latest one off rather well, but i get the the feeling that its a loose loose situation sort of like,
A. if the protagonist dies then either dues ex machina will revive him again or the story kind of looses its main interest. B. if he lives then it goes to show that plot is ones greatest ally.
Im not saying the danger doesnt feel genuine but just that either the story goes on and he doesnt loose anything leaving the whole situation redundant, or he loses a lot and dies making the story feel like theres a huge hole in it.
Id think if he lost something but not a lot where he dies would make this a bit more interesting something like he looses his broken leg or just looses the ability to walk
But thats just my opinion, you do you, and ill be happy to read this anytime. keep up the good work.
7190122 its coming, it really is. I've only had a little bit of time on the weekends to write, since work is keeping me very busy, and this is a very BIG chapter. That said, don't worry. I will update very soon. The next chapter is a game changer that both elaborates on the past, and hints at the future.
in my defense, I cut the extensor tendons on my dominant hand, even with surgery typing on a keyboard is difficult. Couple that with depression...and you get the idea. That said, I'm doing better and writing again. Slowly, but surely. You will see a chapter soon.
7712995 i lay corrected and sorry i did not know about the hand (excuse accepted) it's just (i'm getting tired of saying this) a lot of the stories i read are started then they stall and die, and this story along with many i fear is going down that path additionally this story i wish to not see that happen too. also that's a flying aircraft carrier, it is technically a HOVER–CRAFT. ha saved (barely) FINALY YOU ARE BEING TRACKED
7713029 what happened?? did I lose you again it had been 3 weeks 3 weeks since the last post and you still haven't come out with a new chapter... ugghhh the frustration..
7778898 I'm still here and very much alive, as is the story. I am working on it, but as I have the use of only a single hand typing and editing are both extremely difficult. I will try to have it released this weekend.
Shining armor has colitis?
7053445 probably me not paying attention to proper wording. I was aiming for the old fashioned way of saying he was banging the palace staff. Ill fix it today. How are you enjoying the story so far?
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I am enjoying the story and am very happy to see it being updated again.
7053519 the conclusion of this arc will be posted very soon. I'm actually in a mood to write again, and I'm not twatblocked by writers block anymore. (Finally. ) so it will continue to be updated regularly now. Dont worry, still a few more chapters before book 3 will be out.
Could you please review and post your thoughts on the chapter? I can't improve without having feedback from readers.
7053537
I enjoyed the chapter the only things I found strange were the guy who damaged the wing and how fast everyone accepted the herd idea.
The plane is the newest tech for them so I would think they would have better recruits than the asshat who damaged the wing.
And as far as the herd it just seems fast.
*slowly picks jaw up from floor* m...more please?!? I need to know what happens next!
It's weird seeing it all put together, I'm so used to seeing it in various pieces.
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Feels kinda like I'm looking at Frankenstein's monster after it's been assembled. In a good way.
AAAHHH YEEES!! ive missed this story, re-read it like 5 times now. SO happy its back.
7058846 it never left, I was just too busy and distracted to post or update. That said, tjose problems are solved and I am writing again. So? What's your thoughts on the chapter? Reviews always help me improve and motivate me to write.
7059601 hmmm well one thing that kind of bothered me was the repetitive themes of certain (in danger) scenarios but you actually kind of pulled this latest one off rather well, but i get the the feeling that its a loose loose situation sort of like,
A. if the protagonist dies then either dues ex machina will revive him again or the story kind of looses its main interest.
B. if he lives then it goes to show that plot is ones greatest ally.
Im not saying the danger doesnt feel genuine but just that either the story goes on and he doesnt loose anything leaving the whole situation redundant, or he loses a lot and dies making the story feel like theres a huge hole in it.
Id think if he lost something but not a lot where he dies would make this a bit more interesting something like he looses his broken leg or just looses the ability to walk
But thats just my opinion, you do you, and ill be happy to read this anytime. keep up the good work.
*Shakes Night* WHERE IS IT! WHERE IS MY PRECIOUS!
7190122 its coming, it really is. I've only had a little bit of time on the weekends to write, since work is keeping me very busy, and this is a very BIG chapter. That said, don't worry. I will update very soon. The next chapter is a game changer that both elaborates on the past, and hints at the future.
7192081 Eh I understand :P I just wanted to mess with ya, by the way how ya been? I haven't said hi to ya in a while Night.
7341609 its not over yet. Next chapter will be out soon.
7342153 And that will be?
Awesome chapter by the way!
Have a plane! ✈✈
7696296 probably I can even guess what I'm thinking....I thought taco...I just made myself hungry
nnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to see what happens!!!!!!
I also figured out what type of craft they were talking about. It's a hovercraft.
7342153 said 19 weeks ago.
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Riiight...hovercraft. vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/marvelcinematicuniverse/images/3/3f/Helicarrier_aft.png/revision/latest?cb=20150318054757
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in my defense, I cut the extensor tendons on my dominant hand, even with surgery typing on a keyboard is difficult. Couple that with depression...and you get the idea. That said, I'm doing better and writing again. Slowly, but surely. You will see a chapter soon.
7712995 i lay corrected and sorry i did not know about the hand (excuse accepted) it's just (i'm getting tired of saying this) a lot of the stories i read are started then they stall and die, and this story along with many i fear is going down that path additionally this story i wish to not see that happen too.
also that's a flying aircraft carrier, it is technically a HOVER–CRAFT. ha saved (barely)
FINALY YOU ARE BEING TRACKED
7713002 nope, not dead, or even near it really. I still have another novel to release after this for the trilogy. Buckle up. It'll be a long ride.
7713029 dang it i made noises i'm not proud of there again! and i realize the size tag does not affect pictures.
7713029 what happened?? did I lose you again it had been 3 weeks 3 weeks since the last post and you still haven't come out with a new chapter... ugghhh the frustration..
7778898 I'm still here and very much alive, as is the story. I am working on it, but as I have the use of only a single hand typing and editing are both extremely difficult. I will try to have it released this weekend.
7779133 YAAAYYYYYYY
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uuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm???????