Five years have passed after the war with the Changelings, an era of peace ushered in. The sun is shining, the birds singing...and the palace lively with two very mischievous fillies. Now with more borscht!
I can that you really changed your writing style. I noticed you changing tense in the first story but this story seems the better for it. Present Tense is really the best. I like this first chapter over the first chapter of your other one. It doesn't feel as much of a rush or dull. So far the story really looks interesting! Continue on with my kudos!
What does Nightmare have planned hmm? Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
more now. do it.
Like I said before, this is a brilliant start!
Keep pumping the chapters out!
wanna bet it was Nightmare Moon?
I've added this story to a few groups.
Hopefully it'll give it more publicity
I can that you really changed your writing style. I noticed you changing tense in the first story but this story seems the better for it. Present Tense is really the best. I like this first chapter over the first chapter of your other one. It doesn't feel as much of a rush or dull. So far the story really looks interesting! Continue on with my kudos!
Nice start
Awesome first chapter can wait to read the rest. Keep up the great story writing!