Five years have passed after the war with the Changelings, an era of peace ushered in. The sun is shining, the birds singing...and the palace lively with two very mischievous fillies. Now with more borscht!
I really like the fillies, they act and speak like... well... Fillies. They're innocent, they're impulsive with their words, and they're downright adorable when communicating with million dollar war planes. Though to be honest I imagined it ending somewhat differently....
"You are cleared to land, birdie!"
Five Minutes Later...
"FIRE! FIRE! FIRE ON THE RUNWAY!"
But that's just my morbid sense of humor. Again, I say that Talon and Luna should be Lottery tickets. The impact Gs alone most have been phenomenal, not to mention the shallowness of the water. But I digress, it's nice to see them back in their home Equestria again.
Pony Stark... *sighs* Curse these Pony Puns, they drive me to drink.
5060232 personally at this moment, Celestia and Dusty. I liked how Celestia was so calm but noticed the change in one of the fillies tone, whereas i think Dusty would make a great mother. It was amusing to read Twilight alomost blowing a fuse. :)
I'm sorry I took so long getting to reading your chapter Nightie. I've just been busy and every time I started... I had to stop to do something. But now I have caught up and I'm glad I did. This was a fantastic chapter and so was the last one. Keep 'em comin!!
Let's give this one a once over, shall we?
I really like the fillies, they act and speak like... well... Fillies. They're innocent, they're impulsive with their words, and they're downright adorable when communicating with million dollar war planes. Though to be honest I imagined it ending somewhat differently....
"You are cleared to land, birdie!"
Five Minutes Later...
"FIRE! FIRE! FIRE ON THE RUNWAY!"
But that's just my morbid sense of humor. Again, I say that Talon and Luna should be Lottery tickets. The impact Gs alone most have been phenomenal, not to mention the shallowness of the water. But I digress, it's nice to see them back in their home Equestria again.
Pony Stark... *sighs* Curse these Pony Puns, they drive me to drink.
I think that's everything.
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Also, I can't help but imagine Sledge Hammer sounds like Sam Elliot
Or Rooster Cogburn... Take your pick.
I progessivly love your chapters more, with each one.
5060187 ^//////^'
5060197 but its true, i love this story to bits. :)
5060222 did you have a favorite part? What do you think of Dusty, and who are your favorite characters so far?
5060232 personally at this moment, Celestia and Dusty. I liked how Celestia was so calm but noticed the change in one of the fillies tone, whereas i think Dusty would make a great mother. It was amusing to read Twilight alomost blowing a fuse. :)
This is an amazing story i can't understand why it's only have 78 likes, anyway i'm glad to have followed this story from the first chapters.
5060323 with you there mate. This story deserves more
I'm sorry I took so long getting to reading your chapter Nightie. I've just been busy and every time I started... I had to stop to do something. But now I have caught up and I'm glad I did. This was a fantastic chapter and so was the last one. Keep 'em comin!!
Sweet family reunion at last. I can't wait to see how excited those adorable foals will be when they see their parents!