Five years have passed after the war with the Changelings, an era of peace ushered in. The sun is shining, the birds singing...and the palace lively with two very mischievous fillies. Now with more borscht!
5357297 o.O; i'm a girl! XD! And no, she isn't dead. Well, sort of. You'll have to see in the next update, but technically speaking, she didn't die, she was redeemed.
5360727 So really. You comment abut the profile picture, but have nothing on the chapter? Really? Anyone? C'mon, I'm dieing to know your thoughts on it.
5491510 The new cover art and chapter 12, "New Beginnings" will be released next weekend at the same time, once the commissioned artist finished the print. I need to get in contact with you on IMVU or Mabi to go over the scenes with Sledge and Fleur to make sure I have those correct before proceeding further.
I noticed a few people saying Nightmare is dead. Evidence is shown at the end of the chapter that she is indeed still alive as the charm around Talon's neck is still lit up. Plus it was a bit obvious what was going to happen. From Luna and Tia's mother's appearance and what she said. The whole point of that "dream" was to give Nightmare Moon the chance to prove she had really changed, to show that she actually cared. It's a classic Redemption arch where the once villain is put into a position where their self sacrifice, their death, will allow those they claim they love and care for now to live. If they chose to give themselves so other's may live they pass the "test" that proves they have indeed changed and are not simply playing to emotions for a darker end goal.
Nightmares 'death' was more symbolic. It marked the Goddess forgiving her past crimes and allowing her to start new. What ever else this may mean in the future I dunno. I think it'd be interesting if she was given physical body. Either way fantastic Chapter Endless. As always I enjoy your story :D.
5697018 Immortal lovers and all material mentioned was co written between Sam and myself. All cameo appearances by his character were also approved by him in writing, screened and gladly received. Several of his blogs will reflect this, and there are several sections where a link is included but hidden within the text that hyperlink directly to his page or the story mentioned.
5357234 Wait, who's evil?
5357297 o.O; i'm a girl! XD! And no, she isn't dead. Well, sort of. You'll have to see in the next update, but technically speaking, she didn't die, she was redeemed.
nighty is dead
5357313 I LOVE THAT PROFILE SO MUCH SHE LOOKS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5359099 eh? Profile?
Excellent. Although the bow was never used...
5359111 profile pic.
5360727 So really. You comment abut the profile picture, but have nothing on the chapter? Really? Anyone? C'mon, I'm dieing to know your thoughts on it.
Was a great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
How's the next chapter comin' along?
-J
5491510 The new cover art and chapter 12, "New Beginnings" will be released next weekend at the same time, once the commissioned artist finished the print. I need to get in contact with you on IMVU or Mabi to go over the scenes with Sledge and Fleur to make sure I have those correct before proceeding further.
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I'll be right on.
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I can't get Mabi working, so I'll see ya on IMVU.
I noticed a few people saying Nightmare is dead. Evidence is shown at the end of the chapter that she is indeed still alive as the charm around Talon's neck is still lit up. Plus it was a bit obvious what was going to happen. From Luna and Tia's mother's appearance and what she said. The whole point of that "dream" was to give Nightmare Moon the chance to prove she had really changed, to show that she actually cared. It's a classic Redemption arch where the once villain is put into a position where their self sacrifice, their death, will allow those they claim they love and care for now to live. If they chose to give themselves so other's may live they pass the "test" that proves they have indeed changed and are not simply playing to emotions for a darker end goal.
Nightmares 'death' was more symbolic. It marked the Goddess forgiving her past crimes and allowing her to start new. What ever else this may mean in the future I dunno. I think it'd be interesting if she was given physical body. Either way fantastic Chapter Endless. As always I enjoy your story :D.
I don't like the chrysalis tag I see here...
5697018 Immortal lovers and all material mentioned was co written between Sam and myself. All cameo appearances by his character were also approved by him in writing, screened and gladly received. Several of his blogs will reflect this, and there are several sections where a link is included but hidden within the text that hyperlink directly to his page or the story mentioned.