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Twilight and Rainbow Dash are planing to have a romantic picnic, a pretty simple date, but still it was going to be fun. But things soon get complicated as Applejack confesses her feelings for Twilight, and causes everything to turn upside down.
With a sad Applejack, a confused Twilight, and an angry Dash; will they manage to find a way out of this without hurting everypony? Or will everything fall apart?
F/F Polygamy. Do not continue if this frightens you
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Lesbians and polygamy. Two of my favorite things.
Also, I liked the fic. +1
3957894
Why thank you
This fic was a nice, sweet little gem. The thoughts were organized beautifully throughout and the progression was just about spot on. I do have to say that the ending felt a bit rushed, but that might just be me. Overall it doesn't effect the cuteness or the greatness of the story though. Keep up the good work!
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Yeah, the ending was kind of rushed, but I'm glad you still enjoyed the story
Some scrambled letters, but meh. +1
I thought it was rather nice. +1
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Glad you liked the story.
Thank you both
I had to stop reading at least twice, it was so cute *3*
3958891
I...think that's a good thing
3959752
Very true.
some mistakes, but love it anyway!
i really wish this was going to be a longer story, instead of a one-shot. but it was still an awesome read!
3961295
Well, I am planning a sequel which will be a multi chapter story. Also, I'm glad you enjoyed it
3960875
I'm glad
3961488 yay for sequels!
This is awesome. My 2nd piece of polygamy!
Dude make a sequel!
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I'm happy you liked it
Does this mean your second story with polygamy that you've read? There's some pretty good ones at the AppleDashLight group if you want to read some more
3970850
Definitely. Between how fun it is to write this pairing and all the amazing feedback, I can't imagine it'll be too long before I start making it
3971890
Yes. My first poly shipfic was a piece of RariJackDash. (Forgot what it was called.)
While i have read a few AppleDashLight ship fic's before i must say this was good.
The phasing was a little fast but nothing that was bad mind you.
The characters was believable and very enjoyable.
And being a Dyslectic i can't pin point grammar or spell errors, sorry
Over all a 8/10.
Good but not perfect keep writing and you will get there some day.
4029086
Thanks for the comment
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, ans this is my first story where I can see myself improving. Hopefully the sequel will have better pacing
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the soliloquies that the characters had it added a nice little touch of insight. Great job
P.S. I would totally dig a sequel
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A sequel to this will take a bit as I want to put as much effort into each chapter as I put into this. In the next few weeks, I'll probably be starting the sequel once I finish up one of my already ongoing stories.
I'm pretty sure the right term would be polyamory, since polygamy is if there's 3+ people that are MARRIED, but it's not really worth going back and fixing since you used the term polygamy so much.
Otherwise, the pacing seemed okay, even if the ponies were a little out of character and Dash's initial reaction was a little over the top. I only saw a few grammar mistakes and the ending was pretty satisfying!
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I always appreciate when people tell what they liked and disliked. But yeah, I agree with all you said.
Thanks for the comment
I'll be sure to remember to use the term polyamory, when I start on the sequel
4344366 Sequel? SEQUEL! Sequelsequelsequelsequel yay sequel!
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Yeah, it's coming. But it might not be for a while.
I already have two ongoing stories.
Did you mean polygamy or by any chance polyamory? 'Cause I know a bunch of people who don't know the difference, and I just wanna make sure.
4426787
I may have mixed up the terms in this story here or there, I should fix that, but I do know the difference.
4426962 good on you, then.
There were moments in the story when I felt things were rushed, but there was such witty humor, and cuteness in here that me, a openly polyamorous person has experienced before. Like the scene where Applejack is watching them cuddle, and he starts to feel lonely till Dash re assures him that he wasn't forgotten. That warmed my heart so much :)
Love the story. :)
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. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story
Aw, thanks
4535001 Of course! :)
Besides, this is one of my favorite ships.
I have a picture to prove iti.imgur.com/VYyYa0N.jpg
4535036
Yep, this is a really cute ship. Unfortunately there aren't enough adorable pictures of them though
4535045 I wish I was a better artist. I would create artwork for all of these lovely ships!!
By the way, message me if you like!
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Very sweet and fun, though it's a polyamorous relationship. Polygamy means you're married to more than one person n_n
*beats inner critic back into the closet*
A sequel would make me very happy.