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FlameingToast


NO LONGER POSTING: love you all goodbye, and remember to never stop stop shipping cute things <3

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It's Hearth's Warming Eve in Ponyville, and everypony is happy. Well, mostly. Fluttershy's plans for spending time with her family were cancelled, but Applejack decides that it would be best if she stayed with Applebloom and herself.

Happy holidays everyone!

Sorry if this isn't the best, just some shippy stuff that I wanted to do.
Cover art found here. It is not mine.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

I can't find much flaws. Excellent job, well constructed. Looking forward to more stories by you.

The only odd thing is that the fiction seems somewhat rushed :ajsmug:

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Thanks:twilightsmile:
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Well I'm glad you enjoyed it:ajsmug:

aaaw that was so cute :twilightsmile:

I think I like the way that this went with the shipping, it was nice and even though the feelings are mutual, like most shipfics, it's believable and closer to how I think they would act. I like the slower romance stuff. Cuddling is cute.

Dawwwwww... I think I just melted from the adorableness of this! And honestly it hit a heart string with me because me and my best friend have had moments very very similar to this minus the kissing part. :ajsmug: + :yay: forever! :heart:

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Thanks, I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story:pinkiehappy:

All i can say is we need more AppleShy. they are so cute together. :raritywink:
Good story not anything piratically wrong that i noticed.
A nice little 9/10 from me. :scootangel:
:ajsmug: :heart: :yay:

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Yep, the world needs some more Appleshy:yay::heart::ajsmug:. I'm glad you enjoyed the story:twilightsmile:

Adorable AppleShy is always wonderful, and this fits the bill. I love how patient Applejack is with Fluttershy and how slow their relationship would progress. I'm a sucker for cute cuddling, especially if it's between these two. :ajsmug::heart::yay:

Gave a look to another of your stories and...

Fluttershy was in awe with her beauty. She had known that her friend was pretty, but not until now had she never looked at friend in a way other than a friend. Calm down Fluttershy, she told herself, don't stare at her. she's you're friend for Celestia's sake! She's also wonderful, kind, honest, cute, and beautiful mare.

"your"

And...

"But ya two make a cut couple! When are ya getting married?".

"cute"

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Alright, I'll fix those right away.

that was so cute it hurt! :heart:

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