Perfect Days

Commander Hot Stuff

Commander Hot Stuff #1 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Awesome fic

TwilightUCrazy

TwilightUCrazy #2 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Thank you. :)

TwilightUCrazy

TwilightUCrazy #3 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Well... I don't know about that. ^^;

I applied everything I've ever learned about effective and compelling fiction writing and just tried to do a little blurb that everyone could enjoy -- regardless of any shipping/non-shipping loyalties. But every time I read through it, I come across something I wish I'd written a little bit differently, or come up with something I'd like to add that could make the story richer and fuller.

But I'm allowed to give myself a little credit in that this is the first fan fiction piece I've finished in a long while, and I'm glad I did it. Felt good to exercise the creative muscles again.

I thank you for your compliments, and I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

AirDasher

AirDasher #4 · Oct 5th, 2013 · · ·

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This was really a great fic You were able to portrait the characters really good as well, it felt like you really was in the mind of Rainbow Dash when she spoke or thought something. You had a new way of Friend shiping them than most writers, which is a good and renewd thing i've been waiting for Defenately worth a fave How you can only have so few views is beyond me! Keep up the good work good sir

TwilightUCrazy

TwilightUCrazy #5 · Oct 5th, 2013 · · ·

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Usually I don't go self-promoting my work. I generally just leave it to the readers to make the decision whether or not it's worth sharing with others.

I'm glad you enjoyed it though -- when I wrote it, I wrote it for you guys. I sure didn't do it for myself. :)

AirDasher

AirDasher #6 · Oct 5th, 2013 · · ·

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3303973 you did a great job

TwilightUCrazy

TwilightUCrazy #7 · Oct 5th, 2013 · · ·

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Appreciate it. Happy reading, buddy. :)

Prane

Prane #8 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

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Very nice story - Rainbow giving elaborate excuses on why not to meet Twilight or Pinkie, then a one-line explanation for Fluttershy really made me laugh! Good job on the chase sequence, too. It is very detailed and smooth, feels interesting the whole time (not to mention that the idea of stealing AJ's hat itself is fun). All in all, I liked your story and would love to see more!

TwilightUCrazy

TwilightUCrazy #9 · Oct 6th, 2013 · · ·

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Well, maybe. I'm submitting something to the AppleDash anthology. Don't know if it'll have the same impact or not.

Glad you enjoyed it though. If it reaches a few people and they enjoy it, then I'm happy I took the time to sketch it out. Thank you for your compliments.

Happy reading, friend!

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