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Draequine 2951

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    Draequine's Stories (2)

    • PonyFall:Adventures in Chaos
      Part of a Self-insert colab

      79,928 words · 2,866 views · 212 likes · 17 dislikes
    • M.I.B: Mares In Black
      We live in secret, we exist in shadow. And we dress in black.
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    Why worry?

    Just your regular, unreliable story.

    Crazy loner meets magic hobo.

    Magic hobo accidentally burns house down.

    Shenanigans occur

    (Beware:lots of cursing in this fic.)

    (Beware:Chapters are prone to radical changes.)

    (~Don't get me started on those dream sequences.~)

    (Chapters with (DANGER ZONE) are being rewritten. Read at your own risk.)

    Cover source: http://www.ponibooru.org/post/view/64482?search=discord%20humanized

    First Published
    20th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    10th May 2013

    Comments ( 229 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The madness begins. :rainbowwild:

    I suppose I better finish up chapter one of PonyFall: Australia.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Quick! Before a Diamond Dingo Eats it!>>344389

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    hehe nice Draequine :rainbowlaugh: <----RD's reaction xD

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Dayum that picture and that story. Mighty fine I say.

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    cool story

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 59w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I aught'a go to school dressed like this guy someday.  :rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Damn it, why do I find out about things always late? I totally would've liked to join the project.

    Anyway, nice story you've got there. As some said, there are quite some typos. Most of all, you've misused "your" a couple of times.

    It seems fine for everything else, besides a bit too much swearing, and maybe the "mind voice" thing could get annoying if it's overused; but maybe that's just me.

    Keep this up, you've had a nice idea with the Ponyfall project! :twilightsmile:

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Reviewed your story: STARSWIRL IS BEST PONY

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is Fan Tucking Fastic. Seriously I love it, especially Ashton and his crazy voice in his head. :pinkiehappy: MAKE MORE SOON:rainbowkiss:

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Something that is just too fun to read once. You sir lost the internet, and gained a kingdom.:pinkiecrazy:

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>404705

    But gancolt gets starswirled... All I got was tom

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :moustache:

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 58w, 2d ago · · ·
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    "Who is he to say that I can't go back in time to steal my own cotton candy cloud?"

    Yeah, who does he think he is!?:twilightangry2:

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 58w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sorry about all the comment deletions, but I had to reorganize the chapters to put in the prologue....

    I BLAME MUFFINS!

    Gak
    #16 · Chapter 4 · 58w, 38m ago · · ·
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    First. Liked it. Glad to see ponyfall is still going.

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 58w, 34m ago · · ·
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    hooray, let the flood of chapters pent up over the last week commence!

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 58w, 28m ago · · ·
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    Shhhhhhh!!! I just edited the fic a tad D:

    #19 · Chapter 4 · 58w, 8m ago · · ·
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    whats different?

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Whoa...

    While others humanized pone are basically useless other than being clopping materials, Discord proved himself as a decent moneymaker :pinkiecrazy:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 57w, 5d ago · · ·
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    April 13th 2012

    *looks at date on PC*

    April 10th, 2012

    Mother of God, Doctor Hooves must be the Author! :yay:

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love it.

    Though seeing Discord so down made me very sad.:fluttercry:

    Don't worry, Chaos pony will save you! -Tries to arive-

    Wait you've been causing it. And now you...Oh crap. -metal hugs anyway-

    Can't wait for the next part!:heart:

    #23 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well, this is certainly gonna be interesting.  If I could ever make a good Ponyfall story-which I cannot without some form of help with editing, ideas, etc.-  I would pick Pinkie as no one has made a Ponyfall story involving her.  Or Fluttershy for that matter.  Why did someone have to take RD? Why the CMC?  I wanted the chance to hang out with a pony that had similar interests.  Hey, I like things that are cool, and want some things to be 20% cooler.  If the author of the Rainbow Dash story cannot continue, I will gladly finish it(with his input and permission of course).

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>444466

    Guess who has both Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy?

    :trollestia:

    #25 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You?!  Dammit, stop trolling.  If Celestia's evil twins Molestia and Trollestia have them, then they shall pay!

    #26 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>444478

    Nope, The_Slorg has them both!

    :yay:

    #27 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Why aren't they up then?  I want to help him on the Pinkie Pie one, because I know her antics better than anyone.  Plus I can stand her for longer.  Tell him that, and that if he declines, the full wrath of Nightmare Moon shall come down on his arse.

    #28 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13327/The-Day-My-Beard-Turned-Into-Pinkie-Pie cough cough

    If you want a chance to get in, then you should join the pony fall channel in the IRC. >.>

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 57w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiesick: Goddammit. I had just had to get curious... :pinkiesick:

    We are all Slave of Armok! The God of Blood! All hail the GreatToadyOne!

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    and then John DeLancie hears Discord speaking.

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    LOL AWESOME

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Man... it just get's better an' better... so good!

    #33 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER AND BETTER!:pinkiehappy:

    #34 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Y U NO BE MAGIC

    #35 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This sheet just got serious, yo.

    #36 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I wonder if my life would be better if I also had a voice in my head....

    #37 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I love this story the best

    I can't stop laughing

    #38 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Bloody BRILLIANT! Oh, I can't wait for the voices in his head to start talking to each other. This is going far better than I expected this story to go!

    #39 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>476984

    Your about to be horribly surprised at what happens.

    #40 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I just started reading this story today, and another update?! OH MY, IT'S BEAUTIFUL!

    #41 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>476996

    "Horribly surprised" just makes me more exited! :pinkiecrazy:

    #42 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>477005

    Just for yew! :rainbowkiss:

    #43 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh my goddesses... does that mean he got his powers back? Epic either way.

    #44 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :facehoof: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops:

    #45 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    "Crush! Kill! Destroy! Swag!"

    I lolled XD

    #46 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Shitstorm inbound!!!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp:

    #47 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 14h ago · · ·
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    CRUSH KILL DESTROY SWAG :rainbowlaugh:

    i lauhed so hard at this, i fell off my chair. You sir made my day

    #48 · Chapter 5 · 56w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Gawd now he has THREE different consiousnesses (spelled right?) in his head.:twilightoops:

    And there's also that whole magic thingy...

    You know what. It's just a lot easier to sit back and watch this unfold.

    #49 · Chapter 5 · 55w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Uh oh...:twilightoops: This can't be good for him or the world... :yay:

    #50 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Once again, you have rendered my mind into a state of chaos. :derpytongue2:

    #51 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I have no idea what I just read, but hell it was fun to read! Why can't i have epic dream battles like this!

    some misspells here and and there but nothing else. can't wait to see how else discord fucks up ashton's life.

    #52 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    right

    #53 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Im suing you for excessive brain fondling.

    #54 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, now look what you've done!  You've taken my perfectly good brain and reduced it to a smoldering puddle of discord.  And you have NO idea how much of a headache that can cause!

    Keep up the swag.:moustache:

    #55 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 23h ago · · ·
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    #56 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 22h ago · · ·
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    My brain is so full of fuck right now, and I'm liking it.

    #57 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Dat song at the end... :pinkiegasp:

    #59 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 20h ago · · ·
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    I... Iiiieeeeeeiiieeeiii my head hurts. :pinkiecrazy:

    #60 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 16h ago · · ·
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    My brain is now full of fuck, as the saying goes. Keep up the randomness! It makes me smile despite all the fuck occupying my brain!

    #61 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 14h ago · · ·
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    #62 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 13h ago · · ·
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    What a mind screw. Natural for Discord. Never watched Inception. Tion Cep In!

    #63 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 12h ago · · ·
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    This would be a troll fic by any other stories standards, but here its just fantastic!:rainbowlaugh:

    #64 · Chapter 6 · 53w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Giving new meaning to the term "mindfuck"

    #65 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was wierd... now I wonder about this cute fluffy pony.

    #66 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I found this completely normal

    I wan' pway wif cwazy voice!

    #67 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    And that's how ponyfall was made.:pinkiecrazy:

    Gus
    #68 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I don't even know, what did i read? Though i think i liked it, didnt I?:pinkiecrazy:

    #69 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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             !erom rof tiaw t'naC

    ...gnitsertin saw taht ,lleW

    #70 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cool chapter

    CLICK THIS

    #72 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I have no fucking clue what I jusr readt but I liked it.

    #73 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Yay, more insane randomness. Exactly what you would expect from living with Discord.

    #74 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 4h ago · · ·
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    That Bright Eyes comment... Killjoy named Ditzy that... just saying

    #75 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>623086

    *whistles*

    #76 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>623087 I'm purely innocent

    #77 · Chapter 2 · 52w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Well, aren't I a wee bit late on the bandwagon.  But still, I...love...this...PONYFALL!  Arguably one of the best on the site!  Also, if you are ANYTHING like this in real life, I officially declare thee the most awesome person in the world.  Have a mustache good sir.  :moustache:  Nah, take two.  :moustache:

    #78 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 3h ago · · ·
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    WHAT. THE. HAY. No, but seriously. What? Ashton was like What? and Discord was like LOL! and the Fluffy Ponies were like Spawhgeytee? and Bright Eyes was like Gimme ur money b!tch!

    All in all, swag chapter.:moustache:

    #79 · Chapter 6 · 52w, 2h ago · · ·
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    I can't imagine what was going through your head while writing this...

    #80 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 2h ago · · ·
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    >>623544

    I'm on new medication! :pinkiehappy:

    #81 · Chapter 7 · 52w, 2h ago · · ·
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    :pinkiecrazy: Is it normal that I feel a bit related to the story... only with 20% less insanity.

    #82 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Who the hell is Bright Eyes? That chapter was naaaasty but then it got funny as they were walking away.

    #83 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "So paprika and thyme will do will give it a kick"

    Either Ashton really is getting fucked up in the mind, or you missed this

    #84 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well, I won't voice my predictions, but anyway, I can see more wierd stuff occuring in the future, and if we think about it, this can only be the humanified version of the Bright Eyes in his Discord induced dream.

    #85 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Holy Harmony, and I thought that Chaddy/Chad/Merry/Mai bollocks was confusing.

    #86 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>625770

    Yeeaaaah, sorry about that :pinkiesad2:

    This ponyfall fic will get nasty sometimes.

    #87 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    i did a quick googlin for ''Blue and orange mane'' and i found dis

    she has yellow coat(jacket) too. Care to explain?

    #88 · Chapter 7 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>644247

    Ah! Bright eye's most distinguishing feature is her silver eyes.

    #89 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome story dude! Though are these crazy-wierded-out-dircord-hallucinations are starting to get confusing, or is that just me?

    Keep up the swag.:moustache:

    #90 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>650091 Yeah, they are supposed to be confusing. When Discord gets his little bursts of chaos, things get weird.

    #91 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Soo what other author

    For the rest of the callab?

    #92 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>650134

    Ah ha I see. I like the effect of Discord's growing powers on Ashton's mind. :pinkiecrazy:

    #93 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>650163

    Oh, I guess I should have put a link at the end... Its Full Metal Pony: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/20289/Ponyfall%3A-Onward-Valiant-Crusaders.

    #94 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    igh this is just one big mindf**k :derpyderp2:

    #95 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>650232

    You got that right! :pinkiecrazy:

    #96 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh that's Discord in his Discordest. I am confused and sleepy now :applejackconfused:

    #97 · Chapter 8 · 51w, 23h ago · · ·
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    That's fuckin' funny.

    #98 · Chapter 8 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "Oh look some sani-nope, nevermind." I've been wanting to use that somewhere other than IRL for a while, now. Thankyou for sharing your insanity with us once again. I'm going to go talk to my printer.:pinkiecrazy::raritywink:

    #99 · Chapter 7 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    When ever I read these chapters, I truly feel as thought I'm living in the mind of an insane person.

    Well, that is to say that I'm not, but kudos to you, good sir!

    You make chaos work!

    Also, is it weird that I have the urge to kill when thinking about those fluffy pony things?

    #100 · Chapter 8 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm not sure if I like this mindfuck you're giving me right now or not...

    No, I like it. I makes me feel a little more inhuman.

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