• Published 4th Dec 2013
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Fluttershy's Revelation - Taco Belle



What Happens when Fluttershy tries to reveal a Secret...? It causes a chain reaction of secrets to be revealed!

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The Aftermath

Twilight groaned, looking over the letter she received a year prior, the memory of Pinkie Pie repeatedly poking the spherical doodads on her little crown as she read the letter somehow still fresh in her mind.

It has been a year, since Fluttershy's admittance to being a changeling caused that chain reaction, and resulted in all of them 'coming out of the cacoon' as it were, and Twilight muses to herself that it is still weird using changeling phrases in terms after avoiding them for most of her life... might be why most of the villagers of Ponyville still use the pony versions of the old sayings, but as the representative to pony-kind that changelings are not all sociopathic monsters with delusions of domination, she feels the distinct 'identity' the phrases lends to is rather important for her duty.

The letter, of course, is Framed in her palace's main entrance room, which has since become a sort of trophy hall for her achievements in changeling equality, which have not been minor, as the last year has been fraught with challenges of all shapes and forms, from anti-changeling mobs vandalizing Ponyville, to giant red centauric monsters sucking all the magic out of Equestria...

Ironic, after all the times they saved Equestria, and all the drives for Equality she pushed for, they only made any progress after she and her friends defeated Tirak.

Silver Lining, and all that.

Her face turns to a soft smile as her eyes pull away from the letter, and to the one of the many paintings in the hall, this one depicting a recent event; Celestia, Luna, Cadence and herself signing a bill known as the "Changing Love and Tolerance" decree, a copy of which is beneath this image, which grants the members of the Ponyville Hive all the rights and privileges of any other ponyfolk of Equestria.

The painting depicts the three Alicorns, and fledgling Changeling Queen, pressing ink-dipped hooves against a fine ivory parchment, with smiling faces. While not everypony supported the bill, the Rulers of the land have all been willing to welcome Twilight's ilk with open hooves, bearing no grudges due to the actions of one insane, radical Hive Queen.

Since that day, Ponyville's name was officially changed to The Ponyville Hive, the old name kept as a part of it due to the town having served as a haven for changelings for generations until only recently. Tearing her eyes from the painting, she looks at the room as a whole, the Palace of Friendship, beautiful crystalline walls, accentuated by semi-organic structures and pillers; changeling Decor, of course Rarity had a fit when Twilight began to 'gunk up' the entrance hall for this whole exibit, but again, the young Queen feels its best to wear her race outward to promote acceptance.

The rest of the palace is more or less goop-free, however, just because she's a changeling doesn't mean she's a savage that lives in a organic hive-nest full of slime and egg-sacks, thats just gross and primitive, Comparable to a pony wearing animal hide and defending its cave with a spear made from a stick and a pointy rock!

Her eyes finally settle on the Painting above the door going further into the Palace, featuring most of the Ponyville changelings, standing with the equine family's that have adopted and raised them as their own before bringing them to Ponyville to live peaceful lives... The Pie's, Granny Smith and Big Mac who lived just outside the town, and her own parents and big brother, standing and hugging their black-carapaced, purple-shelled family, as if their race did not even matter... because, really, it didn't.

Twilight was late, nostalgia from a long, hard battle for acceptance fades, as she turns to the exit, Pinkie has found a way to mix joy and love into cupcakes, and she is very eager to try her friends newest attempt to combine pony and changeling cuisine.

Outside, the sun shined down apon her own purple shell, a color the entire town voted on to represent their hive in honor of the pony that made it possible, and adopted by all ponies that join or are born into the Ponyville Hive.

"Twilight hurry up, before Pinkie eats them all herself!" shouts Rainbow Dash, from the bakery all the way from across town, through the Hive Mind Twilight established for the hive, optional and disable-able for all members of it. "Alright, alright, I'm coming, i was just... remembering is all." she replies, with a physical and mental giggle, before she spreads her membranous wings, and takes to the air.


Twilight has a feeling, everything will be just fine.

Author's Note:

What can i say, Inspiration finally hit me.... shame it had nothing to do with Zomcora.:facehoof:

Comments ( 38 )

Erm...

:duck:

Oh, forget it, I don't know what to say actually.

6073702 I personally think the last part -MADE- the Letter, honestly... and it segways into the Epilogue i just wrote in a hour, spontaneously.:pinkiecrazy:

6004431 Epilogue is up after a Year!!!

5453392 So is this Epilogue.:rainbowkiss:

This was a nice little epilogue. It had been so long, I actually had to go back and reread the original chapter, having forgotten all about this story.

6588681 That is to be expected, its been ages.:facehoof:

6588662 Rarity-face is enough. :raritywink:

6588690

Yeah, I'm kinda at an indecision here. :facehoof:

6588697 I should clarify, i do not try to write "Good":duck:

I try to write "Fun":pinkiehappy:

So if you had fun with the story/chapter, Mission complete, if not, theres always next time!

6588703

I know. I actually like this epilogue, to be honest. It's just that for some reason I feel like the first chapter did its work already, so we didn't really need an epilogue until you actually wrote it today.

6588706 I just felt the urge to establish what effect on the current-period Equestria that the events of the first chapter caused.

Think of it as a Extra for those where weren't satisfied with the first one, like you seemingly were?:pinkiecrazy:

6588713

Well, not really. That aside, I'm glad you wrote this. It was a perfect story for me when I seemingly got bored yesterday. For some reason, that's been happening a lot.

6588721

There's only one thing, though: have you considered getting a good and official editor? There are grammar mistakes strewn all over the place, and even though you said in the description that Phoenix Avalon helped with the pre-reading, they're still there. I'm not trying to insult him/her or anything, it's just that their work doesn't really seem to pay off that well.

6588728 I used to get a fuss over spelling errors and proper grammer, but after a.... kerfuffle i had with one proofreader trying to basically change the entire premise of my fic in a unrelated incident, i decided i don't really... care that much.

If you can understand it, thats good enough to me, i only care about really terrible sentence flubs that confuse the reader, feel free to point those out.

6588744
You know what? Just bringing up old Cheese Legs has gotten the old Plot Bunnies running circles in my mind. What would happen if Chrysalis learned of Twilight becoming a Princess, took her time to build up a proper army this time, and is taken off guard when it turns out that Ponyville is already full of Changelings. :trollestia:

somehow i feel that we need a chapter where we see celestia reaction to twi being a changeling queen

6588782 Damnit now i need to make a Mid-pologue....:trixieshiftright:

If only i was joking.:facehoof:

6588808 She allready knew.

In this 'verse, if you want to call it that, Celestia gives Changeling babies whom's parents are unable to care for to caring, accepting families, and Celestia later too Twiling as a Apprintace based on her magical merits.

The rest of the plot goes roughly the same, with everyone being a secret changeling, untill Fluttershy nuts up in the original story, then the rest of the series happens, albeit with more episodes based on acceptance of changelings as people, not monsters.:pinkiecrazy:

6588819
What the hay is a pologue? Did you mean a mid-prologue? A mid-sequel/midquel? I'm confused, and so is Google. :applejackconfused:

6588824 ahh i see then how about a chapter where we see about twi's past as a changeling as celestia's student

6590516 That'd be a different story altogether, as it has little to do with Fluttershy, much like this Epilogue...:trixieshiftright:

6594252 It makes a nice package of story ^^

I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, given how other things are capitalized, but in the short description:

What Happens when fluttershy tries to reveal a Secret...? It causes a Chain Reaction of secrets to be revealed!

"fluttershy" should be capitalized.

8620508
Fixed! Even tho it's usually the sort of thing i disregard.

Normally the only spelling/typing errors i fix are ones that made the story impossible to understand... like how i can get Can/Cant mixed up... really fucks with context.

Brain Damage, aint it a bitch.:pinkiecrazy:

Well you get a fave for the laughs.

10066600
Thank you!

I Really should get back to this stuff... D&D has kinda stolen my creative Mojo tho.

Wait...
If Twilight is a Changeling, how did she become an alicorn ?

11673183
Now its been a while since i wrote this, but the Intent was for these lines to Explain it:
"the memory of Pinkie Pie repeatedly poking the spherical doodads on her little crown as she read" indicating that Twilight is a Queenling
And
"The painting depicts the three Alicorns, and fledgling Changeling Queen, pressing ink-dipped hooves against a fine ivory parchment" is referring to Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and then Twilight, as clarified in another line.

Whilst any Changeling could Imitate a Alicorn(tho the Larger ones like Celestia are straining due to the extra mass they need to manifest and sustain), Twilight is doing so in her illusory pony self as a Status thing, as she has become the Hive's Queen, mostly for the sake of Unity and protecting the Ponyville Changelings from being... lead astray and manipulated by other Hives, that may have worse intentions for both the 'Lings of Ponyville, and Equestria.

In the episode where Twilight became Twilicorn, in this Continuity she actually ascended to the Status of Fledgeling Queen, and just took on the form of a Alicorn in her disguised self to cover for her newly increased height(which is a bit more then in Canon), and her more Elaborate Wings. were easier to conceal as Pegasus wings, then hiding them fully... it was in part a simple means of taking a form that tool the least energy to maintain.

I love this story, a very creative take

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Thanks! I tried to read it myself after all these Years, but I've been... unable, the Typo's are really rough:facehoof:

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