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Friends warped in uncanny ways.
A shop that protects him against the changeling invasion.
Their only hope of rescue is a plate of spaghetti.

In short, Spike isn't having a great day. Because of the peril Spike will learn something about himself that will change everything.

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Comments ( 23 )

Thats good one, I remember there was some movie about great steal or something and there was that guy what can't remeber face and they had that password it was something with football i think.

But srsly most funny scene was when you just said that he writted it with spaghetti not only with sauce xd

Nice way to lampshade the fact that the lead characters share the same basic body model. Clever little fic.:pinkiesmile:

As always, when 5590626 puts a Spike story in a folder, I am not disappointment. Enjoyed this one. While I adore seeing Spike being badass, it's always fun to see him act like a little boy. :twilightsmile:

perfect one-shot. nothing more to say.

*snerk*

Nicely done.

Clever, author, very clever. I'll shoot this one a thumb.

hi hi

Very nice. I'm having a hard time deciding what my favorite part was, and I think that's a good sign. Possibly the "I wish this had been previously established," bit, or maybe the spaghetti. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by LeoneHaxor deleted Feb 6th, 2015

After realizing that Rarity basically looked like every other mare Spike had ever seen, Spike took a long, hard look at Rarity's personality and realized that he was only attracted to her because she had diamonds on her butt.

Found a typo: "Closing she shades".

I like how you took the shortage of pony models and made it a thing. Very clever.

CCC

Brilliant story. Poor Spike, though...


5595726

Given what she manages in Testing Testing 1, 2, 3, Rainbow can't possibly be nearsighted (she may be farsighted, though, or colourblind).

But that was hilarious, anyway.

I knew Mr. Davenport was suspicious!

Nopony sells quills and sofas in the same store! But there are TONS of changeling shops like that in their nation of Badlandsia! I don't know why... it's just one of those weird and eeeeeeevil things those horrid bugponies do because they're weird and eeeeeevil!

5595435 To be fair Season one had that due to the limited budge and resourcs back then, the clones slowly vanished after about season 3 ish. Seaosn one i was really copy and paste.

Hahah pencil breaks, but spike is a dragon coudln't he just sharpen the tip with his claw or his teeth.

anyway loved the twist very clever.

What a great story. I loved the ending too. Gives me hope for Changelings.

5621656 Ah, the changeling scouts slowly melted away after their queen's plan failed...

(And seriously, TheReaderAndWriter, good story!)

That was fun, have a fav.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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