When Twilight Sparkle makes a shocking discovery during a visit to Fluttershy, she may have to seriously reconsider her opinion of her friend.
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Quite surprising...and good!
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Despite the wall of text this was an intresting concept.
An unusual idea and well executed. Well done.
Just one small note for the first paragraph:
getting together over tea to discuss what I we had read
You have an extra "I" after what.
I've seen this before, but everybody just assuming that the local know-it-all... well, knew it already was a nice twist.
seems a bit appropriate. is all I'm saying.
Anyway, well done.
Could be extended. Otherwise, a good read.
Lololol hillourous espilay the part with big Mac .
Needs an epilogue/expansion.