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Trixie returns to Ponyville wielding the alicorn amulet. She defeats Twilight and takes over Ponyville, but before she can go on to enslaving the populous, she must win another duel, one with Spike, who has been secretly training in the draconic art of wizardry since infancy.
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"I protect those who cannot protect themselves by destroying those who would do them harm."
In my view, those are the words of a hero, indeed.
I like this so far. True, there is some work needed with keeping track on what's italicized, but I am eagerly awaiting chapter two.
3526701 Thanks. My first successful story.
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You are welcome. ^^
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I also find the whole kinda-skyrim-dragontongue that Spike speaks, and how it's taught to them in their eggs, to be a cool plot thing. Good luck writing this!
3526732 Thanks! I'm only borrowing a little dragontongue from skyrim since the translator only has a few words for it, but I do plan to use some. Also, again, thanks!
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Welcome. Also, what translator are you using? Are you using the translator thing in the Elder Scrolls wiki?
You have my full attention good sir.
3526748 Why thank you, friendly spirit of darkness
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Extremely interesting premise, and a well thought out conflict. Get a proofreader/editor to tidy up a bit, and you're golden.
3535133 are you volunteering?
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Interesting. Yes, I'll give it a shot. But I have to let you know I'm usually the one who needs a proofreader. I usually just write and make sure it makes sense. Someone else would correct things and give me opinions. But I will try. Downloading your story now.
3543501 okay. Want the early reading passcode?
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3543568 okay.
mothens and i dont even get over one k
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well... that was quick... and Spike hasn't even done anything yet... I hope he does something soon
How about some Skyrim spells and Thu'ums.
BRINGSINGER also something with a shit load of lighting
Short, but I do like the verbal abuse he gave to Trixie. I was actually thinking some spells from the anime Slayers, such as Dug Haut (summons big stone spikes to impale targets), Flare Blitz (basically a machine gun spell that shoots dozens of fireballs), maybe Icicle Lance (I'm pretty sure that's self-explanatory). And if you want Spike's dark side to pipe up during the fight, I got some Demon spells if you wanna hear about them. ^^
I eagerly await the coming duel.
Interesting concept. I shall read it soon. First, however, I wanted to point out a couple of errors in the description.
First, "defeats down" needs to be changed. Second, where I put the "*" you need a comma.
sweet
3893656 there, fixed.
I noticed you added a soul eater reference so creative
4059859 why thank you.
When all is said and done I still want spike finish trixie yelling Limit of the thousands hands, respectful hands, unable to touch the darkness. Shooting hands unable to reflect the blue sky. The road that basks in light, the wind that ignited the embers, time that gathers when both are together, there is no need to be hesitant, obey my orders. Light bullets, eight bodies, nine items, book of heaven, diseased treasure, great wheel, grey fortress tower. Aim far away, scatter brightly and cleanly when fired
Nice reference there busy
MOAR
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What is that a reference to?
8792715 Bleach.