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LaceySurprise


I am a Unicorn stuck in this alternate human universe just trying to adjust to life as a human and missing being an unicorn. I used to live in Hoofton with my special some pony named Gamer Ace.

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This story starts with a battle in which Shining Armor dies. Cadance must learn to survive as well as keep the kingdom in one piece. Will she be able to do that? Or will depression bring the Empire into ruins and dismay. Luckily Spike is there to help her out. Let's see how The Crystal Empire will stand the test of a tragety of this magnitude.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

Please comment your thoughts on the story!!

Please tell me this is a SpikeXCadence story. If it is, I will love you forever.

;) You'll have to wait and see

I enjoyed reading it...........................
Please continue, even tho your grammar need some tweaking,
But If you need help, I'm here for ya
:raritystarry:
:twilightblush:

3623923 Thanks! I'm sorry my grammar needs tweaking. I'm just trying to create the best story I can. The next chapter should be "EPIC"!

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I don't know if it is, but I'll still read it regardless,
Spike'll be the dad that Skyla may not have wanted, but who she still needs.....................
As for Cadence,
Just let her be a supportive mom who will live through her happiness in her memories

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Then I shall read on:flutterrage:! And good luck with this:twilightsmile:.

Warning, the newest Chapter(The Kidnapping) is not for the weak hearted!

No Skayla NO!!!!!!

wow tha-thats just painful

It was painful to write. But to have a good story, you need to catch people's attention. To have a great story, you need to affect their emotions. Even if it means ripping their heart out. Sorry if I caused anypony physical pain by it. But don't worry, it'll get better....Or will it? :pinkiegasp:

I kinda almost cried when Skyla died, so young, and yet she couldn't achieve her cutie mark!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:fluttershysad::fluttercry:
And now we get to Spikedance somewhat starting to form.....................
Maybe we will get something beautiful and grand,
Good chapter tho, and the realism is there for sure!!!!!!

@Gamerpony1996, AppleJack appeared in the beginning, and I don't know enough about Bonbon to include her. So, they're not going to be in the story. Sorry.

@SpikeSupreme13, Thank you! And don't worry, for the torture everyone has endured, they will be rewarded. :raritywink:

I love this story please! Make more I love it :twilightsmile:

I'm thinking of splitting this into two stories. That way I can explore the romance in more details. What do you think everyone?

i can't believe it. The last chapter was the better of the five T-T. Please, update this soon!

Oh... Finish this already, the wait is killing me. Positively speaking. This story is awesome, continue when you have the time.

Yeah..I just finished it. So there ya go. :unsuresweetie:

3655496 I don't know... I expected to see an actual ending (or maybe a sequel), I don't feel like this ended here, so I choose to not believe that it was the end. But, it's just my opinion, so do whatever you please. Good luck with your future projects.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,
DON'T GO THROUGH WITH IT, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

I will just say that this isn't the end of my story writing. I will write more tales to capture your interest. :raritywink:

UPDATE!!!! THE SEQUEL IS NOW UP! You didn't really think I'd end a story like THAT did you? :ajsmug:

Never start your story description with "This story..." It's just bad PR.

I know this is supposed to be serious, but whenever I see the line, Great cloud battle, I can't help but laugh. :rainbowlaugh:

I may seem heartless for this, but I didn't get sad over Skyla's death. There just wasn't enough character development for me to know her. You can't just plop a tragedy onto someone we don't know and expect us to be sad over it. it works with the actual characters because we have watched the show and we know who they are. But you need to be more careful with OCs.

Very better that the another history.:pinkiehappy:

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