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Faithful Brony


Hello fellow ponies, welcome to my corner of fimfiction. My names Frostfire and i write action & adventure stories with a bit of romance in them sometimes. hope you enjoy them and blessings from Luna.

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A few months has past since Spike the young dragon found love in the most unlikely of places, in our goddess of the night princess Luna and he could never be happier. Now he wants to share his happiness with his best friends the elements of harmony and Luna's sister princess Celestia but he is also faced with a choking reality. A dragon pony relationship has never been heard of on Equis let alone Equestria. Will the ponies he has been close to for so long, accept his new found love or will they be judgmental and think harshly of him for his choice. This is the thought that worries him, but sometime love is worth even the greatest of threats.

also for those who may have noticed, i changed the cover photo because the original photo i had for it disappeared and i could no longer find it. so i had to switch it to this one because it was the best one i could find related to the topic.

Advisor and Pre reader: ix12

the original story spikesXluna was made by made by mallajong1 and i have been allowed to make a sequel by him.
heres the link to the first one
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50304/1/spikes-luna/gift

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 101 )

I never thought I would see a sequel for spikes Luna :raritydespair: I'm glad you receive permission to do a sequel :pinkiehappy: I cant wait to see the reaction form the others. :rainbowkiss:

Spike with a goddess. Stallion's would give their souls and their back leg and front legs just to get a good look at the rolal flank on purpose. Spike is a boss.
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And as for Luna, and Spike,
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They did something...
Put's on sunglasses.
Re-productive! Yeaah!

AL

nice !!!!! bravoo !! more chaps plx !!!!!!! :twilightsmile:

YES! A SEQUEL! :pinkiehappy:

What happened to the other sequel? The one that wasn't mature.
Doesn't matter. It wasn't that good. And so far this looks very promising.
I only want to know, why the hell were Spike and Luna eating breakfast at the kitchen of the Cristal Casttle, instead of... Any other place?
And why you keep adding another pair of “” every time you finish a sentence, even if the same character is still talking?

2450181 i was told your supose to do that every time someone talks and if i add a second one after the first than i apoligize. thanks for telling me about that though
also the breakfast didnt talke place at the crsytal castle it took place at canterlot castle reason being is because shining armor is still captain of the royal guard and princess cadence had to drop off her reports from yesterday to celestia i will go and fix that so that people dont get confused

Hey do you have link to the first one? I'm new, and haven't gotten the hang of finding things of this site.

CIA

"My only request is that you work on the transitions between each character."
"Bloody Pink pony with its wall breaking."

Lacking capitalization of name. :ajbemused:

at twilights library whether it

with twilight studying

twilight has me reorganize her library

Otherwise enjoyable, good job.:moustache:

Well, finally a one good update!:moustache:

It'll be funnier if Luna said 'sugar dragon' to Spike.

AL

yaaaay !!! an update !!it was short :c , but really awesome !!

Pretty nice chapter and looking forward to the next.

2644248 thats actually a pretty good idea

2643964 really i thought i already did that but i will go fix it thank you

2644032 yea i will fix that too

2644380 2644429 2656879 2644051 yea sorry it took so damn long but between final projects and the fact that i only have access to a computer during the school day it took a little bit to properly go over the chapter find the errors fix them and make it long enough so again sorry it took so long i will make the third chapter with something extra for you guys
:twilightsmile::raritywink::pinkiehappy:

love it :flutterrage: MORE!!!!!!!!!

Spike and Luna told their friends but he need Twilight Sparkle's family's blessing since he is apart of the Sparkle family as well.

2883830 they will be notifed by Twilight off screen but thanks for pointing that out

make it long please i love this paring and your story
here take some mustashes :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Riz

2883832

OH MY GOD ! ITS FINALLY UPDATED :pinkiehappy:

make this fic long, we need more spike x alicorns ,that aren't twilight, on this site.

make it long fic pls with cherry on top:fluttershysad:

AL

moar plx D: !!!

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actually word of God (Faust) has it that Spike was raised by Celestia and was later returned to Twilight as Celestia believed they belonged together :trollestia:

but anyway, this was a great chapter :pinkiehappy: i was worried that you was going to drop a drama llama into it but its nice to see everything is smooth sailing for a change :moustache:

I think i'll vote for a longer fic as i want to see much more of this. Most excellent chapter.

2894365>>2889916>>2888624>>2884780>>2884648>>2883950 well it looks like the people have spoken, it is settled then, it will be a relitively long story. does anypony want a quest to be involved in this story or just a love story.

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i wouldn't mind a love story, perhaps have a mini quests thrown in here and there :moustache:

2899329 Only if you manage to make such quest look like something necessary or logic, and not only some filler you're forcing into the story to make it longer.
Love stories can be just that. But if you can fing a way to make it something more, go ahead.

2899329: I would like to see maybe some drama between spike and luna happening if it has quest

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Comment posted by Faithful Brony deleted May 23rd, 2014

you should throw in moments where Spike has to come to Lunas aid, such as ponys who HATE the idea of those two being together.

Or have it where somepony trys to kill luna for the reason that they feel like she betrayed the pony race by falling in love with Spike.

Oh, hear is another idea for you, sense all relationships are not always perfect, it would make their relationship stronger by having them go through some challenges, and hardships that could put both of them too the test too see how strong their bond really is.

Example 1, cheating

Example 2, misunderstandings

Example 3, false rumors

if their where too be some Ponys that HATED the idea of those too being together. It would not take much for some of Luna and Celestias subjects too try sonthing dastardly like that

Nothing will get in the way of the love of Spike and his moonpie Luna.

does this racist pony know that dragon are more or less immortal? that dragons are all but immune to magic? that dragon scales are effectively indestructible? Spike bathes in lava! LAVA! i don't think this pony could hurt him even if he had an army!
i look forward to seeing Spike put this fool in his place (i.e on the floor begging for mercy) :moustache:

:facehoof: Just beat the shit out of the racist ponies Spike. They cant fuck with you.

I hope however is after Spike gets a dragon claw uppercut and sent to the moon.:twilightangry2::flutterrage::moustache:

:ajbemused:I really hate racist.

I like to to see somepony make a racist threat with an AK-47 shoved up their plot-hole on DDDAAAAAAAAAAA MMMOOOOOOONNNNNNNAAAAAA BEE-YECTH!!!!
:flutterrage::twilightangry2: :moustache:

3265692 except the belly which is the week spot for pretty much all dragons,

3267414 well don't worry cause racists never survive long

well the story definitely gets more suspenseful so get ready people to be on the edge of your seats.

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i always thought it was the roof of the mouth? seeing as the belly also has lava proof scales etc :unsuresweetie:

3270431 yeah it does but that's about all it protects from its still vulnerable to knives or spears in that area.

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i don't know what dragons you've seen mate but i've got an entire shelf full of books about dragons and non of them has weak belly scales

but... whatever this is your fic/universe you can run it how you please, so lets both agree to disagree and call it a day... yes? :twilightsmile:

3275106 books and movies that ive read and seen, have always suggested that dragons have soft underbellies that go from the top of the neck to the base of their tail. i have even read some stories on Fimfiction that follow the same principle, and they were great stories. but yeah, i guess we can agree to disagree.

Awesome and the plot is forming can't wait to see where it goes

3265692 simple answer dragon slayers (with special weapons and the like :P) such a thing must exist. because I'm guessing not all dragons are going to back off when asked.

CLIFFHANGER, hahahahaha, i know don't you just hate those pesky cliffhangers. well guys hope you enjoy the chapter, get ready for the adventure that is to come and on that note. Did Spike survive, will Luna smile again, Will they ever find the culprit, Would Celestia look good with a hat on, all these questions will be answered in the next chapter.

next chapter, The Dangers of Love

I swear by the Princesses of Equestria if Spike dies we will riot!!!

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