After the incident a the Royal Wedding in attempting to steal the love of Shining Armour from her sister, Cadence, Queen Chrysalis is left banished to the Crystal Cave. As she stares to her reflection in the walls of gems, she recalls the memories that turned her into a dark being. As she delves into her past of pain, misery, and heartbreak, she discovers that maybe anypony can change... Or can they?
Way to short in my opinion.
I think the story could have been better
in many ways if it was longer.
Its a good story, but it lacks substance.
At least to me.
Its rather interesting, but IraqLobstah is right. I , for one, think your story was very nice and descriptive, but perhaps you could make it longer. I really enjoyed reading this though.
755411 I find this story misconcepted. This story is just before the Canterlot Wedding showing why it is short. As well as I am busy on a new story as a sequel to my Resident Pon-Evil.
I've seen this before, but who did this?
but again, the symposis is a bit misleading
764855 Yes, I have done this before. It was, however, mispublished. I do however plan to fix the synopsis soon due to a few errors.
I kind of feel bad for her now...
nice job i... i dont know what to say
Too rushed but a great story, and who said that always happens when they feed? She did it to Shining Armor in an argument.
well, that was interesting
OMG! One of the BEST FICS EVER!!!!!!!
805441 Why thank you. I appreciate it!
add more chapters!javascript:smilie('');
1080612 Plan on it.
1088092 yay
I love this story, it's awesome. Sadly it's pretty short, but it seems that it's unfinished. Well, I look forward to might see some more in the future (: It's certainly a good read.
1093616 Bad news, and good news. Bad news is, I won't be back around to this for a while. Good news is that I'm working on a few of my other stories. While you wait for this one, I suggest Resident Pon-Evil for a try. Check it out if you haven't already!
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2663098 I know... Just alot I've been working on, and this one's a tough one to continue
now I want to say something about a revolution,or ending Celestia's reign of tyranny or something,but I can't come up with anything
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An interesting take on Chrissy