Ever since I became a Brony, I have always loved cross-overs. I made this account to finally write my own!
What happens when a Changeling hears about a night when ponies dress up as other ponies? Well, she gets really ticked off. After getting a plan, and a good disguise, she decides to have some fun with Ponyville as...
Nightmare Moon! At least, that's who she's supposed to be...
Everyone's writing Nightmare Night stories, so I thought, "Hey, why not?" This is my first story with the Comedy tag and the Everyone rating, so I hope I did a good job!
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Not bad at all.
There is some errors, like :
filly
Applejack / Nightmare
Remove Twilight.
Dang, I knew there'd be a few errors. Sorry, I'll fix those immediately!
Poor Chrysalis...going in to battle with a half-baked plan...no research...
You deserve a flank wuppin' missy.
3383066 She never was the smartest mare at the Gala. (Puns!)
So they start to attack her even if she didnt do anything. Seems legit for being heroes.
3383159 >Threat to Equestria
>Defeated
>Returns
Well, what would you do?
Poor Cryssi, didn't even get any candy. Darn racist ponies.
Drat, I hoped this was a Grinch fusion crossover after the first part of the story, but then it wasn't.
3383871 Sorry, but that's Christmas.
3383681 Racist, no. Angry, YES.
There is a typo here:
This story is good, but why did you not "create" new costume for the M6? Since it's an other year, it's strange they don't change it, no?
And I'm not of fan of the "off-screen"
It work if it's visual, not went you read it I think
Ah, the hilarity! Not even Discord could have come up with a more ridiculous situation for Chrysalis to be in.
3386796 Yeah, I get that, but it kinda adds to the effect of the comedy aspect. It's just something you wouldn't expect in a story. I'll fix that typo. THis thing still needs alot of maintenance
3387053 Thank you, sir!
Without trying... Sounds like I read Pip ...lel
Reminds me a bit of Villains Day .. or was it heroes day?