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  • E Fluttershy's Tail

    Fluttershy's tail always drags along the ground. She finds some strange and interesting things caught in there...
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  • E The 63rd Rune

    Twilight and friends get turned into... stallions!?
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  • T The Talk

    Vinyl Scratch and Octavia have a talk.
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  • T Ponies and Cage

    Only one man can return the Elements of Harmony to Equestria...
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  • E The Princess and the Pupil

    Twilight receives an urgent message telling her to come to Canterlot, but it doesn't say what for...
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  • E A New Spell

    Starswirl teaches Clover the Clever a new spell.
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  • E A Sound in the Forest

    Nothing is as it seems.
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  • T The Beasts of Tartarus

    Fluttershy sells her soul and becomes the Ghost Flier.
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  • 2w, 1d
    The Talk Gets a Fanfic Reading!

    So this is like the raddest thing that's happened to me in a while. The lovely Scribbler has bestowed upon me a fanfic reading, and I couldn't be more happy with it. If you're a fan of The Talk at all, I highly recommend checking it out, because readings by Scribbler are something to behold. She definitely goes above and beyond with them!

    Also I'm bad at making blog posts like this so I'm not sure what else to say. Uhh, I hope you enjoy it as much as I did! Go watch it.

    9 comments · 99 views
  • 11w, 6d
    Officially on Hiatus

    This has been coming for a while now, and I'm sure everyone has already assumed this of me. It's not like I've really written anything in the past few months, and what I have written wasn't even close to being acceptable for publishing.

    So yeah, I'm officially declaring my writing "on hiatus" until further notice. I've really just entirely lost the willpower to write, and even though I have ideas, writing is such a chore to me. It's at the point where I'd rather do anything else instead of writing, like art or video editing. Sorry if this comes as a disappointment to anyone.

    It's just my writing, though. I'll still be active in the community and maintaining my website. I do have a commission or two that's been paid for already, but if I find that I really can't bring myself to work on those, I will be refunding them. Hopefully it doesn't come to that point, but I can't say for sure.

    Sucks to not be able to do the one thing you're kinda good at.

    13 comments · 203 views
  • 16w, 16h
    ABagOVicodin Paid Twenty Dollars for a MLP Porno and All He Got Was a Lifetime of Shame

    Hello friends.

    I sit here during the final day of Bronycon, in a hotel room and surrounded by fellow writers. Golden Vision, Sunchaser, Jake the Army Guy, Bleeding Raindrops, and more. On the television in front of us plays the critically acclaimed live action MLP porno, My Little Porny: Fuucking is Magic.

    Let me be the first to say that ABagOVicodin money for this. He took twenty of his hard earned american dollars and gave them to a group of people in order to write, direct, and film this "movie." Previously, upon revealing this to us, he pressed his head against the wall and wept, basking in the gravity of his situation. Really, it's the only appropriate response.

    Nothing about this film is good. Absolutely nothing. The writing is nonexistent, the acting can't even be considered sub-par, and "audio engineering" was an unknown term to the entire production team. And just as another reminder, $5000 went into the production of this. It is the least arousing "film" ever made, probably. Everyone in this room is less of a man for have witnessing it.

    But of course, that doesn't stop it from being entertaining. It's a blast to watch with a group of people, with some choice quotes really popping out of Vicodin's mouth:

    "Her pussy looks like the aliens from mass effect."

    "I paid twenty bucks for this. *incoherent sobbing*"

    "Because their acting is so bad, if I fuck them, can I get convicted for necrophilia?"

    "I want to kill myself."

    At one point, he just collapsed to the ground. Only one who had been part of the funding could appreciate it like this.

    I don't actually know where I'm going with this blog post. The point is that this is awful and Vicodin has made very poor life choices. Do your best to learn from his mistakes.

    Pray for him.

    38 comments · 499 views
  • 18w, 2d
    The Most DANGEROUS Game - Voting Time!

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In her youth, Twilight Sparkle discovered a way to infuse technology and magic. 20 years after her breakthrough, she is now the CEO and founder of Sparkle Industries, and one of the wealthiest ponies in Equestria. Her relatively perfect life goes sour, however, when she is captured by a group of griffons who want to steal her technology.

First Published
15th Sep 2012
Last Modified
20th May 2013
#1 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Well, well, well, it seems somebody else is also writing an Iron Mare fic. I'm writing on myself actually. I wish you luck!

#2 · 114w, 1d ago · 12 · · Chapter 2 ·


If you are actually writing it on yourself then I would recommend not showering for a while.

#3 · 114w, 1d ago · 5 · · Chapter 2 ·

You knew this was coming.

#4 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Nice start! Definitely looking forward to more!

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#5 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


where did this come from

you sneaky

#6 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

wow, way to go! I really like how this is shaping up. I truly think this will be a great crossover.

As it appears you will involve Trixie, I wonder if she would take the role of Obie or Rhodey, or someone else.

Anyway, keep it up, I am terrible at criticism, so I won't give any, and I love that twilight is the 'tony stark' of the story.


#7 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Why do I have the feeling that Filthy Rich is going to end up being Obadiah Stane.

#8 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This is gona be gud.:moustache:

#9 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Ahem.... This was done before

#10 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1280013 thank you for pointing that out. Don't worry, I'm writing it in Word.

#11 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Congratulations, Twilight... You've just changed the world! I hope that what you get after the change is what you hoped it would be!

#12 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

so far so good...

#13 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


Yeah, I believe they called it 'Iron Man.'

#15 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Interesting so far...

#16 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

The writing style is good, and i enjoy the way you have set up the company`s history. but at this point you don`t see twilight being a very damaged character, unlike the "real" stark. He was a billionaire, Cassanova, genius, womanizer: and twilight`s just a wealthy nerd with a slight drinking problem, who even admits it.

#17 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

The writing style is good, and i enjoy the way you have set up the company`s history. but at this point you don`t see twilight being a very damaged character, unlike the "real" stark. He was a billionaire, Cassanova, genius, womanizer: and twilight`s just a wealthy nerd with a slight drinking problem, who even admits it.:moustache:javascript:smilie(':moustache:');javascript:smilie(':trollestia:');javascript:smilie(':facehoof:');:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

#18 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


You're in for a treat.

#19 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Damn, you've managed to successfully combine two of my favorite franchises. Let's see how you do with what you've created, shall we?

#20 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1281093 knows it >>1280925

Twilight suffers from extreme OCD and inferiority issues remember?

>>1280242 As great as that series is touted to be (I've never played it thus I won't comment on the veracity of the statements), Iron Man was originally thought up by Stan Lee, the guy who practically defined modern comics. Iron man is a LOT older a concept than Deus Ex, but they share similar main characters. I personally wouldn't mind seeing this fic combine a bit of both Iron Man and Deus Ex. Mostly, I'd suggest spicing with a bit of Deus Ex because Twilight literally would be performing augmentation on herself and Filthy (or whoever plays Stain) can be doing covert research on it as well as black market weapons deals.

Finally, I would suggest calling her Iron Mane (better than mare because it leaves the gender to question, and anonymity is power in superhero circles) and it has a bit more of a ring, in my opinion, than Iron Mare, but that's up to you Alex. I can't wait for more of this.

#21 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


alex, you're my favorite kind of human being.

#22 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

my god

i've been waiting for this



#23 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Not a bad start! I'm certainly interested in how this fusion will go.

Heh, I had a similar idea for a magic battery, but that was a long time ago in a fanfiction archive far far away. And it had an OC. This looks to be much more fleshed out and less stupid.

#24 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Iron Man crossover featuring Twilight Sparkle as the Iron Man/Iron Mare? OH HELL BUCKING YES! I'll definitely be reading this later.

#25 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Not too sure if I'll read yet or not, but in the mean time its going on "read later" list, and have a thumbs up for the thought.

#26 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I like. Only request is for more technological details? I'm nerdy like that. :twistnerd:

#27 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Well, I'll be keeping this in my "To read later" list. Maybe when I have the time, I'll get around to fully read it.

#28 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Looks interesting, didn't even see where it came from

, but isn't Griffin spelled Griff'in' not Griff'on'?

#29 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


I've seen people spell it as griffin, griffon, and gryphon before. Depends on who you talk to.

#30 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1283132 Ah I see. I guess it cannot be considered a typo then. Interesting chapter 1, will read 2 in my spare time

#31 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Holy shit, Alexstraza! I like where this is going. And where have I heard your name before...?:applejackunsure:

#32 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

'the body may heal, but the mind is not always so resilient' my favorite line across ALL games I have played, make it so Twilight is forced to rely upon an external source to keep her heart beating and have most of herself replaced with robotic parts and we have a good Deus Ex/Iron Man mix

#33 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


There's a list of stuff i'm involved with on my profile.

#34 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Hmm, I wonder how this will turn out *wink wink*

#35 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1283248 Oh, the EqD stuff. I first heard of you as an OC in a Fan Fiction, oddly enough.:derpyderp1:

#37 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Twilight Sparkle+Robert Downey Jr.=????????:derpyderp2:

#39 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

bravo bravo

#40 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Very good read. I look forward to the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

#41 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


The official FIM wiki spells it "Griffon"


=????? then profit

#42 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Nice, I can't wait to see where you take this.

#43 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Wait, a Twilight story based off Iron Man.  Does this mean she's going to be a playmare like Tony was?  Getting it on with a different stallion every other night?  Now that would be hilarious.

#44 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Ooooh. Good start to a good crossover. Looking forward to more of this. :yay:

#45 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


as the doctor wants to say

"fuck the wiki I AM THE DOCTOR

#46 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1283470 I see, There are 3 different ways to spell it, but they all mean the same, so none of them are technically wrong

#48 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Ha, HA! Feel a bit of Spilight going on, always ready to read and review such, I LOVE it, As for the story, a very, very impressive read my good sire/madam, you have my review and support on this, I shall await more of this genuis idea!

#49 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I like this so far. I just started my own MLP superhero fic, and I'm pretty darn sure it won't be half as good as this one already is.

One of the things that made the movie feel awkward to me was putting Tony Stark's abduction at the beginning and then building back up to it. You've fixed that slight bit of awkwardness, but exchanged it for another one, though it's equally insignificant: twenty years is a pretty big jump for characters we've become familiar with. True, they were young and Sparkle Industries would need time to grow to the point it needs to be at in this story, but are you sure fifteen years wouldn't have been just as good?

Anyway, since Spike is already Twilight's number one assistant and old enough for the age difference to be pointless, it's clear which role he will be playing. If Spike and Twilight don't develop the same romantic bond that Tony and Pepper have, I'ma gonna be a little disappointed. Not very disappointed, but a little. Looking forward to more.

#50 · 114w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>1283419 That I agree with, Rarity seems as though she would be the villian in this, as well as Filty Rich, hmm...wonder if the Mane Six (Minus Applejack and Fluttershy) cuold be villians as well, love Iron Man one and two  but I felt like it needs more enemies then just the Iron Monkier and Whiplash, you know?

Love the story so far, really and I'm 100% down for Rarity/Fancy pants for even though she's my least favorite pony as long as she's not with Spike then I'm ok with whoever she is with long as it's not Twilight as well, not sure if there is romance in this or not though...hmmmm....can we have Derpy Hooves in this as well please? And  I always had great respect for Fancy Pants can't wait for the next chapter, also, Twilight drikning? Shit...keep that up, where is Owl and Peewee though?

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