Scootaloo is dead; Rainbow Dash is grieving. Rainbow goes to her grave by the CMC clubhouse, and remembers the death.
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AmethystFire
"We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us." Joseph Campbell
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Dude, this is really good! Keep it going brony!
-Blitz
3442831
You're welcome!
It's a short but sweet story that brought a tear to my eye. (And that doesn't happen often!)
Keep on keepin' on!
-Blitz
Must. Not. Cry.
I have to wholeheartly agree with BlueBlitzPegasister
okay, i cried a bit.
very well done... ya got me right in the feels box
Mechanics: A few small errors here and there, but nothing that destroys the story. Three Shattered Skulls out of Five
Storyline: A bit ambiguous as to the "When." I see references to Scootaloo being a Wonderbolt, as well as Tank's death, so it implies the Crusaders would be teenage to adults, so it's not completely unknown, but a bit more could be done. Three Shattered Skulls
Length: It's short, and says what it needs to say without much filler. A very lean, hearty story. Four Shattered Skulls
Overall: It's a good, solid, Three Shattered Skulls out of Five.
It's so short...
3816431
But did u enjoy the story?
3823603 Yeah I did!
3828180 OK Glad you did
Meh.
3442829 agreed
uhm there is a mistake sir the Poonyville can you edit it to Ponyville.
a mistake I see, "It was quiet fun" do you mean quite fun?
also this:
*Would*
but nice chapter :D
interesting but sad as well