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King Artermis
I write to write, and will try to help those that are having life troubles. My IRL friends labeled me the male Princess Luna because of my night owl status. I am King Artermis of the Moon.
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Eew.
Chapter 2 and 3 are the same :/
DAMN, this story is like drugs! are those fingers growing out of my tits?! AM I REAL!?!?!
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only if you want to be im going to play left for dead now
Alright everyone, I've fixed it.
this is a very good story so far and i can't wait to read the next chapter of this story.
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It is on the way, and I'm glad, and kinda dissapointed with myself that I finished the first arc in three chapters.
Okay four...
What do you have with nightmare moon all your story's start with her
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I love the ideas of an OC that changes the time line of the show to a degree, andI always start at the beginning of the show cannon, but then take the major events, i.e Nightmare moon/Discord/Crystal Empire etc, and implant my character(s) and change a few things. Oh and I have another fic that is ready to be put up, and it has its own independent polt line, and story. Thanks for the great question though.
will there be a update soon i really like this story
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I am slightly block right now, but I will try to push throught it my fair reader.
this chapter...
its good...
BRING ME ANOTHER!!
Needs update
Since you've created a demographic for them, we need to see him convert some ponies into a vampony and necromancer. I'm thinking Vinyl Scratch and Octavia.
I think you should slow down and go into detail more. You almost raced over Rainbow's change scene
though at the moment it seems more like a fantasy day dream than an actual story. But I do want to see this continue to the point of Osiris's normal everyday life. 
Wright on please.
(lol pun) that's a pretty big thing to just glance over. Other than that if you seem to be trying to develop a romance between Osiris and Twilight you should yet again slow down, love and even making friends can take a good amount of time. I do think this holds a great amount of potential
Great story man, I can't wait to read the next chapters.
sun gives off rays not waves, waves can not pass through space the rays of light hit the earths surface causing the molecules to vibrate causing heat wave to radiate from the earth
p.s don't take this seriously just pointing it out
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I understand that, and thank you for telling me what I already know
I said what I said for a reason that will comeup later in the next arc or so.
Is there going to be an update anytime soon?
Update?
Okay everyone, here's the problem. The computer I use to type all of my stories in has finally died. The charging port finally broke, and it will no longer charge, so all stories are now on hold until I can either A: fix my laptop, or B: buy a newer model, and transfer all my data onto that one, so it will be some time before any of them are updated.
Feels choppy and rushed. There's no real explanation for Osiris being in Equestria. There's no real plot to the story. How does a thousand years in a stone prison make the prince mentally capable of running a night court when he has absolutely no knowledge of modern law or customs?
Lastly, why is he named after the Egyptian goddess of life?
You know this chapter surprised me. Not it's content but that it was posted. For awhile I honestly thought this was abandoned and you didn't bother updating its status. I'm so glad I was wrong! Great chapter and I look forward to more!
I'm looking forward to more too. GREAT STORY!
Hurray, the story is still going on!
Please keep writing more chapters if you can, this was one of the stories I was worried about coming to a complete halt.
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Your mythology is a bit off, as Osiris is the Egyptian god of death. As to the reason why Osiris is in Equestria I can't say as that would spoil the discord arc. I am rather new to the writing game, so my inexperience, and lack of knowledge would be the reason why it is rushed or choppy, but thank you for letting me know.
He had run night core out of spite, and was lucky that only one pony showed up.
There is a plot, I am just in between arcs at the moment, so it seems as if there isn't one.
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As my most recent blog had stated my old laptop, which has all of my fictions saved to it, died on me after its long ten year life, so I had to rewrite the chapters that I was on. Also, I write every day, it is just the matter of how much I write, and on which fiction. I even have the next chapter mostly finished in terms of rough draft, but It will be up within the next either few hours, or in the next day.
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Thanks, but please don't be afraid to tell me if I did something wrong. I'm still learning the ways to write a good story, so any criticism, constructive preferably, would be helpful.
Do any of you read my blogs? Because my most recent one gives the reason for why I haven't been posting.
You keep slipping into "I" again, instead of his natural "we" This is in first person, right?
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Please explain better for I am confused
There seems to be no character depth at all so far other than seeing the mc be very arrogant and commanding. Silver seems nothing more than a concubine but will keep reading to see if this gets better or fixes some the plot and character issues.
4500147 I agree
DOOD! This story hasn't been updated in like 2 ,maybe more, months! you have to update man!
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Please have patience my friend as I am doing my best to continue writing around my other real life tasks. I just haven't had the time to continue on any of them. I will be having a break from my other tasks soon, so expect more chapters to pop up.
Wow, Celestia.
Your just whitewashing all Lunar acheivment and culture that you personally dissaproved of, just after banishing the Lunar ruler and their society was at its weakest and in need of care and guidance.
Is it just me or is all Solar history sounding more and more like a vicious takeover.
4809854 ok. just 2 months man that's just a little long to go without an update.
Hopefully the next update is out soon I really got into this story at the beginning... But now the updates take so long I have to re read the story just to remember what happened
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Sorry, as I've said to others I.ve just been really busy with real life stuff, but expect more soon.
With the amount of magical incidents we have here, I won't be suprise if our protagonist become... ageless or immortal.
mmmm interesting, you have cought my attention carry on now media3.teenormous.com/items/ih0.redbubble.net/work.7284575.4.fc-550x550-white.v3.jpg
EVERYBODY DO THE FLOP!
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!!!!!!!
4812528 Just because my other stories do that doesn't mean this one will
4813857 That's what I was going for.
So, not only is your story annoyingly redundant but completely lacking in even the most basic of consistency?
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Something tells me it was more of a culture absorbed the other once the main head of it was rendered to be crushed, not to mention we never did find out what has happened to those of that culture to whether they died out or are hidden in the shadows of the night. Though if there is one thing I do understand, is that I am thrown off that vamponies existed in this AU.
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I'm just saying that it is overly convenient that the things Celestia disapproved of are now illegal or "forgotten".
4813858 Rightttt....
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