Osiris, a human child is taken in my Princess Luna before she became Nightmare Moon, and this is his story when his mother is banished and he is turned to stone by Celestia's hoof.
3432950 I love the ideas of an OC that changes the time line of the show to a degree, andI always start at the beginning of the show cannon, but then take the major events, i.e Nightmare moon/Discord/Crystal Empire etc, and implant my character(s) and change a few things. Oh and I have another fic that is ready to be put up, and it has its own independent polt line, and story. Thanks for the great question though.
I think you should slow down and go into detail more. You almost raced over Rainbow's change scene (lol pun) that's a pretty big thing to just glance over. Other than that if you seem to be trying to develop a romance between Osiris and Twilight you should yet again slow down, love and even making friends can take a good amount of time. I do think this holds a great amount of potential though at the moment it seems more like a fantasy day dream than an actual story. But I do want to see this continue to the point of Osiris's normal everyday life. Wright on please.
“It’s fine Twilight. You don’t have to worry about calling me the wrong name. It has happened before in my past.” I tell her. She nods her head so I remove my finger.
why does that sound like a bad sexual experience term lmao
Alright everyone, I've fixed it.
this is a very good story so far and i can't wait to read the next chapter of this story.
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It is on the way, and I'm glad, and kinda dissapointed with myself that I finished the first arc in three chapters.
Okay four...
What do you have with nightmare moon all your story's start with her
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I love the ideas of an OC that changes the time line of the show to a degree, andI always start at the beginning of the show cannon, but then take the major events, i.e Nightmare moon/Discord/Crystal Empire etc, and implant my character(s) and change a few things. Oh and I have another fic that is ready to be put up, and it has its own independent polt line, and story. Thanks for the great question though.
will there be a update soon i really like this story
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I am slightly block right now, but I will try to push throught it my fair reader.
Needs update
I think you should slow down and go into detail more. You almost raced over Rainbow's change scene
(lol pun) that's a pretty big thing to just glance over. Other than that if you seem to be trying to develop a romance between Osiris and Twilight you should yet again slow down, love and even making friends can take a good amount of time. I do think this holds a great amount of potential though at the moment it seems more like a fantasy day dream than an actual story. But I do want to see this continue to the point of Osiris's normal everyday life. Wright on please.
What happen to Dash, is stupid. Very stupid!
why does that sound like a bad sexual experience term lmao