Osiris, a human child is taken in my Princess Luna before she became Nightmare Moon, and this is his story when his mother is banished and he is turned to stone by Celestia's hoof.
You know this chapter surprised me. Not it's content but that it was posted. For awhile I honestly thought this was abandoned and you didn't bother updating its status. I'm so glad I was wrong! Great chapter and I look forward to more!
Hurray, the story is still going on! Please keep writing more chapters if you can, this was one of the stories I was worried about coming to a complete halt.
4500147 Your mythology is a bit off, as Osiris is the Egyptian god of death. As to the reason why Osiris is in Equestria I can't say as that would spoil the discord arc. I am rather new to the writing game, so my inexperience, and lack of knowledge would be the reason why it is rushed or choppy, but thank you for letting me know.
He had run night core out of spite, and was lucky that only one pony showed up.
There is a plot, I am just in between arcs at the moment, so it seems as if there isn't one.
4500542 As my most recent blog had stated my old laptop, which has all of my fictions saved to it, died on me after its long ten year life, so I had to rewrite the chapters that I was on. Also, I write every day, it is just the matter of how much I write, and on which fiction. I even have the next chapter mostly finished in terms of rough draft, but It will be up within the next either few hours, or in the next day.
4500689 Thanks, but please don't be afraid to tell me if I did something wrong. I'm still learning the ways to write a good story, so any criticism, constructive preferably, would be helpful.
4809245 Please have patience my friend as I am doing my best to continue writing around my other real life tasks. I just haven't had the time to continue on any of them. I will be having a break from my other tasks soon, so expect more chapters to pop up.
You know this chapter surprised me. Not it's content but that it was posted. For awhile I honestly thought this was abandoned and you didn't bother updating its status. I'm so glad I was wrong! Great chapter and I look forward to more!
I'm looking forward to more too. GREAT STORY!
Hurray, the story is still going on!
Please keep writing more chapters if you can, this was one of the stories I was worried about coming to a complete halt.
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Your mythology is a bit off, as Osiris is the Egyptian god of death. As to the reason why Osiris is in Equestria I can't say as that would spoil the discord arc. I am rather new to the writing game, so my inexperience, and lack of knowledge would be the reason why it is rushed or choppy, but thank you for letting me know.
He had run night core out of spite, and was lucky that only one pony showed up.
There is a plot, I am just in between arcs at the moment, so it seems as if there isn't one.
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As my most recent blog had stated my old laptop, which has all of my fictions saved to it, died on me after its long ten year life, so I had to rewrite the chapters that I was on. Also, I write every day, it is just the matter of how much I write, and on which fiction. I even have the next chapter mostly finished in terms of rough draft, but It will be up within the next either few hours, or in the next day.
4500689
Thanks, but please don't be afraid to tell me if I did something wrong. I'm still learning the ways to write a good story, so any criticism, constructive preferably, would be helpful.
Do any of you read my blogs? Because my most recent one gives the reason for why I haven't been posting.
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Please explain better for I am confused
DOOD! This story hasn't been updated in like 2 ,maybe more, months! you have to update man!
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Please have patience my friend as I am doing my best to continue writing around my other real life tasks. I just haven't had the time to continue on any of them. I will be having a break from my other tasks soon, so expect more chapters to pop up.