Hi! I am TheFastSpark! I love making stories about Ponies adopting Drake! I need a cover artist of Drake Snuggling to Luna if it's ok! Please PM if you're interested.
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When Luna thought that this night would be normal. She thought wrong for she finds a stranded and lost child infant in a box in Canterlot's many allyways. Now she must take it upon herself to raise him.
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Don't wanna be rude bro, but have you ever read basic Olde English? You've used a lot of the easiest words wrong. A quick google search shows that Thine is the archaic form of yours; the thing or things belonging to or associated with thee.
"his spirit will take courage from thine"
Seriously, until you get an editor, google is your friend.
Sorry! Thank you so much or this! I will edit more on the story tomorrow. I'm exhausted but.. I'll edit more on it.
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What have you done? It's not that DRAKE.. I made up my own OC silly.. It's not Drake the rapper..
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I know. It's just that image went through my mind when I saw your oc name.
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I was kidding! It ok.. I've gotten many mistakes like that with Drake. I hope you are enjoying the story so far! It's really hard for me cus of Writers block and thinking of what to write. I'm trying my best with the story! Bear with me ^_^
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I'll give it a read, but as >>Techno Babble pointed out. It's always good to have a editor, and proofreader to help you out with your errors.
This where you can find an editor.
I'm interested in the story, can't wait for the next chapter.
A truley sweet fic so far.
Thank you all! For supporting me so far! I love you all.. I really do.. I promise as soon as I get home.. I'll get 4-5 more chapters done.. For you all!!
I am literally wanting to cry of joy right now thank you. Oh! There will be a school scene so in taking up to 6-7 OC requests.. From ponies-griffions-Zebras- any creature!! Please send en while you can so you can get featured in
'Her child of the night'
I really like this Story.
But I must say, I dont like the "old" way Luna is speaking.You should think she learned the modern speak in ten years.
Otherwise It's a really lovely Story. You should try to write a bit longer Chapters.
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Thank you.. But I've really gotten used to doing this voice.. Please.. I will add in the next chapter as a vote.. If Luna should stick to olde English or regular English..
Actually.. Maybe I will at least stick to Thy and Thou.. Those words Luna used.. There.. That will be at least better.
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I appreciate you with the Olde English words but I have shit internet at school ok? I am also exhausted too.. Ok on my way home and I will fix the errors but.. I'm not being mean.. Don't tell me how to run my story.. I make errors and I will fix them.. Do you have any idea how long it takes me to think up at these while brainstorming. I try my HARDEST to keep people happy.. I do.. Cut me some slack. Please.. School exhausts me enough.
I hope luna and Celestia find Drakes real parents and sends them to the deepest pits of Tarterus.
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I feel you.. His parents were abusive to him even as a newborn.. Though.. that is an IDEA.
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I understand.. I have school to put first in the story and.. I haven't taken care of myself for this past month.. I look and feel like complete shit.. I'm exhausted..
its a reverse my little dashie genus
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first like the story 
second i see your making an ageing arc short until Drake grows up
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Sure am! It's easier for me and people will maybe find the Royal Night Diaries enjoyable to read.. I am editing up the Chapters so they are more longer and better to read..
Don't say where Drake is
i think that the Guard should tell where Drake because i don't want luna to be sad and so Drake dose not die or get hurt
4209646 why would you want that
4209668 both the guard and the Wolf king might get NMMed
4209689 ok and Drake still would be safe right
4209696 well NMM is his mom's alter ego so probably
4209704 yeah and ok
Thank you two for debating about this.. Now to clear any info for those who are confused..
The Wolf king which I HAVEN'T decided on a name yet wants to Kidnap Drake for his own slave.. But.. I am curious if the Guard Should or should not tell the Wold king where Drake is..
Anything is possible. ^_^
So what's the decision? Say or not say?
'Ello everyone! A fine story, needs a bit of editing (I'll be working on that as I have been asked to be editor) and I love the support the author here is actually getting good to see support for new authors!
Wish I had this when I started...
Keep those quills scribbling everyone! ~Albionian
4209714 Your welcome and yes Guard Should should tell Wold king where Drake is
4209736 my decision is Say
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Oh thank you! I hope there isn't anything bad.. I know the chapters are short but.. School drains me out of creativity.. It's almost Friday and the most chapters will be coming this weekend.. And.. To be honest.. I NEVER thought this fanfic would get this far.. I never did.. But I guess I over judged myself.. I'll let the editor do his job and I'll see if I can get started on chapter 7. No worries! I'm doing my best to keep updating the story.. Just bear with me with boring school and such..
4209777 You certainly have a bit of a reading base, I can only encourage you to go on. Keep up the good work, and I'll do whatever I can.
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Y-You have no idea how speechless I am right now.. HELL YEAH! CHAPTER 7 COMING UP EVERYPONY!! Then I gotta get off :L
4209875 Glad I could make your day, I'll get back to work on editing and you can churn out a new chapter for everyone.
i am glad that Drake is safe now
and ok
Where the hell did that blizzard come from and what happened to Drake's hair?
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Well.. In the third chapter.. It states that Luna gave him a magical necklace that lets him control the element of ice and frost.. Drake however wasn't in control of this situation.. The necklace reacted to being in danger.. Teleported Drake far from Serot so he could be safe.
4210206...something tells me he know has ice magic and a certian purple alicorn should teach him how to control it
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That's probably a good idea.. I'll consider it!
4210421 Your welcome
As Jonas Savimbi and Viktor Reznov would have said to what Sergot did
"Death to Sergot" (Savimbi)
"They deserve everything they get....and more." (Reznov)
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It was just a name.. I didn't think it was THAT deep 0-0
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Sorry, kinda gets personal when harm comes to children; That and Sergot sounded like a major dick.
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Kinda is.. He hurt a baby dragon and tried to hurt a human child.
4210567 See, but I would have used a more, excruciatingly painful way to have him suffer rather than just a firing squad for Sergot.
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Good point. I'll think of a punishment that Sergot will have. For no I'm just lurking among the stories.
Are you going to continue this??? I would love it if you did but if not, do you think i can have it. I mean so i can finish it. I just want to see this story get done so badly cus it's sooo good.
Sincerely,
Qazzy
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Don't you worry! This story WILL be finished. I just have school and such in the way