Damn, this chapter is gonna give me nightmares. Magicjob gone horribly wrong, ouch... Back to waiting for the next chapter, I guess. From the looks of it it's gonna be worth it .

release all of the magic he absorbed? Are they referring to sex?

Well...that escalated quickly *Sagenods*

Wow, that was...not where I expected this to go.

Lol

Being dead might have been easier to deal with.

I can already feel this guy's pain starting to intense

I cannot help but wonder. What did Nurse Joy do with poor guy's dong?
Like seriously?

I want answers!

I was fully expecting a troll fic, but things seem interesting so far.

I'm so glad that this actually isn't a clopfic....

Or at least yet... ugghh....

But I like how it's going so far.

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The funny thing is that this fic was originally conceived as a pure trollfic to make fun of anthro clopfics. Over time, it sort of became a story in its own right with various elements of parody, satire, and deconstruction. This is the end result.

If I manage to pull this one off, I've got a similar idea to make fun of Brony in Equestria stories.

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Just because no one is bumping uglies after two chapters doesn't mean it won't happen eventually. I just have a few more set pieces to move into place before I can justify it.

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Meh. I'm an adult (mostly) I can deal with it.

Interesting premise you have there.

If I could suggest something: maybe you could make some more description of their anatomy? For instance, we know they still use "hoof" in their everyday language, but we don't know if the even retained hoofs! They can still move their ears, do they also have muzzles?

I am really enjoying this story. The characters behavior is fairly believable and I am thrilled that you didn't jump right into the clop. It gives you room for character growth. Keep up the great work.

3682301 Because I am reverse TEXT doge, not sentence.

3682454 But that was written forwards.

3682704 I edam ti sdrawrof ot ekam ti ysae rof eht yug ot daer, ton tuo fo tnaw.

3685251 Or,Technically you Reversed the text from the orientation we expected from you,Hence making it reverse text,Just in a different sense of the meaning

3687351 Or, you have no fucking clue what grammar is.

3688109 I do,I just don't use it on the internet,out of laziness

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Umm, excuse me. I find your little conversation here fascinating, but would you mind taking it to PMs? I keep getting notifications about comments on my story thinking someone wants to offer criticism and/or encouragement, but all I see is an argument about egoD txet esreveR's gimmick. I'm not one to delete comments, but I'd like to keep my comments section related to the story.

That is, if you don't mind

3689814 Honestly so far i havent got much to say about the story aside from it being a very pleasant subverting of my expectations,And also makes me question if anime nosebleeds work on our protagonist,Because honestly i'd probably be dead from blood loss by that point

3689814 rissuY

ENEAUENAEH SPERNYES SJAMPEL

Me like, me want more, end of story. AND I WANT IT NOW!!!!

I feel there's going to be an a escape plan going to happen at the next part. can't wait to see them running to catch him and failing at it in multi ways. Ps wil spike be in this?

Old McDonald has a fuck
E I E I O

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Wat

Please do another chapter D:

We will answer all of your questions as soon as Nurse Joy is finished."

Nurse Joy

Pokémon Lady?

Nurse Joy

Oh no you did not.

HOLY SHEET THE REFERENCES!!!

So what have we learned today class?...Yes Billie? Magic hand jobs hurt a lot? Vary good Billie.

Magic hand-job? Kinky.

5758845 no kidding

Good job! Surprising amount of plot, an unexpected swerve, and an actually intense deviation from the titillating aspects.

Came for the clop, stayed for everything else.

Anyone else realize that his first, middle, and last names all mean penis? "Bob" "William" and "Richard" all are pseudo-names for penis...

well over 7 feet tall

Why do these fics almost always make ponies giant? It makes no sense. Heck, horses aren't even that tall, generally.

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Hey I am sure that if Celestia was turned into a human she would be that tall

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Well if you scale them with humans they are taller.

Why was he in agony during the magic handjob ???? The whole introduction scene was AWKWARD !!!!!!