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Oh yeah. This is still going on
Man, our hero really heir the jackpot in this chapter. Another morning session with Cadence and Shy, an offscreen moment with Flitter, Cloudchaser, the Flower Ponies, and god knows else, and a final romp with Rarity and AJ. Also, damn is Cadence one talented gal (skilled bi lover, musically gifted in five instruments, one of the top two athletes in the Empire, and a scientist). I enjoy your version of her charCter. Thanks for the chapter, man. It was well worth the wait.
Deez [coco] nutz![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Good shit, I say. I had actually been wondering about this last week and when it would update again, so it looks like I should wonder no longer!
Luna and Celestia are going to get some action.
It worries me that I did that exact math in my head before I even read his own reasoning, right down to questioning whether any mare would want one of my feet up there.
And that part I ended up reading in an 80s cartoon narrator voice. "Meanwhile, up in boobland, the dasdardly Skeletor initiates his latest scheme".
Meh!
No, that just won´t do. Almost no funny alliterations and this chapter was lacking something in comparrison to the others. I just can´t put my finger on it though.
And how you handled Applejack in the end was kinda loveless. I think it would have been better to cut that part out completely.
I could live with even fewer updates, when the quality goes back to the point it was before.
Is wittle wuna gween with envy?
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Yep, and I hope to finish by the end of the year (disclaimer: author is very lazy and makes no guarantees).
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Keep in mind the chapter covers a time span of more than three weeks.
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Let's just say that real life has kept me busy, and my free time isn't as abundant as was expected.
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His body is not ready (no matter how much he may think it is).
Bill has no idea what he's in for
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You know, I'm surprised that foot fetishes don't show up more often in HiE clop. It's all over the place in mainline porn.
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I'll admit I wasn't completely satisfied with this one either, but the chapters leading up to it were getting repetitive and formulaic. This chapter was also meant to be a timeskip/montage transition from the middle act to the final one, so there weren't as many opportunities for additional alliterative absurdity.
As for Applejack, my options were to write it out in detail and throw off the balance of the chapter, leave it out and deal with "Did they or didn't they?" comments, or do what I did. I can't please everybody, and I apologize if I failed your expectations.
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For Bill's sake, I hope not. Knowing Luna, though, it was probably part of her plan all along. Now he's got experience
Yeah I guess you´re right. Satisfying everyone isn´t easy. Always doing the same must be frustrating as well. Especially for you as the writer.
I am just a bit over-analytical because Rarity and Applejack are two of my favourites. The chapter wasn´t bad, I just really dislike montages.
Don´t mind the rambling retard, reading and reviewing rhetorical randomness from relatively rad writers. Me being so hard on you just means that I like your story.
Do this to please yourself, not us.
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Don't get me wrong. I don't get offended by honest criticism. If more readers had the balls to point out areas that need improvement, I would be a better writer than I am already (800+ readers can't all be wrong. I must be doing something right). Me responding to comments simply means I like getting feedback from my readers.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy the final run coming up. There's only 3 more chapters to go, after all.
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I'm glad you like it. I hope the story keeps you entertained as you continue reading.
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Tali still best choice.
Again, I am disappointed by how vague and clinical your story is.
I can't help but wonder if he's going to put some buns in some ovens and/or just make a full harem of mares. Preferably both, but that's just me wishing.
That made me lose it![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
~The Rift Walker
Lost it.
~OreoKookie
So i just found this yesterday, and i couldnt stop teading. You are an amazing writer, and kept me inticed through out your story, i was disapointed that i had caught up to it. I do hope you will continue the story. I want to see how he get back. (So far i am thinking that he gets zapped back as soon as he finishes releasing the last of the magic (cums and goes), although that seems a bit sad, so curious on how it will go)
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Hello, and welcome to the site. I'm glad you like the story so far, and I appreciate your positive feedback. The next chapter is in the works, but it looks like it will be the longest one so far. I'm already over 4000 words, and I still have 2 1/2 major scenes still to go along with transitions. It may come later than I like, but it is coming, so stay tuned.
6253795 Get used to disappointment.
Unicorn boob!
![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
I would have liked that better as well, but by then, I was beating them off with both hands, and they were returning the favor, with interest.
This is such a good line.