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Gettin quixotic up in here

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I saw the title and had to point this out: The proper number should be 9001. Just thought I'd let you know :trollestia:

3643727 Technically, 116,457 is over 9,000.:trollestia:

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The whole joke of the meme though is that because Vegeta just says "Over 9,000", it could very well mean that Goku's power level is just 9,001. It's just a case of taking something too literally, and it ends up being kind of funny.

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The number in the title has nothing to do with that meme and was not chosen at random :coolphoto:

3643843 I realize that, but I saw the title and the joke immediately came to mind. I really don't want to sound rude, but that's kind of the only reason I'm here. Not a big fan of clop. Bad jokes, though, sign me up.

3643936 I wish you well in your search for criminal scum! Wait what.

I what to see where this is going i like so far keep up the good work :heart:

You know what, I think I'm gonna like this story. :heart: I'm not much of a critic but... you do have some good writing. Also, not to be rude, but Comedy would be very fitting in the tags as I couldn't stop laughing. Good job. I await the second chapter.

i has question. Y u put sex and no romance?
but still nice story :D hope to see more

Eh, the ears on top of the head thing kinda kills the boner fantasy for me, and completely omitting mention of what lies betwixt their legs was a bit odd, but hell if I'm not still eager for the second chapter.

You know, the anthro tag, and this line,

but look suspiciously like people

, don't match up with each other. So do you have a reference picture?

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It's possible they simply have pony ears, tails, wings and horns where applicable and a fuzzy coat.

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So then those weird anthros that still has a human faces, and plantigrade human feet?

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Seems that way. Plantigrade feet I can accept, but human faces covered with fur is just weird.

Tnaillirb, yletulosba tnaillirb. I yam ton eb a Orhtna-tsaisuhtne, tub I od yojne flesym emos drawkwa seirots, dna htiw eht kcal fo eht seno taht era ekil siht, sneddas em. Siht sehctarcs taht hcti hcihw I nac't yllamron teg, yrev llew nettirw, drawkwa (Tuohtiw gnivah diputs éhcilc drawkwa stnemom) dna yllautca sgnirb a wen aedi ot eht yssem elbat dellif htiw parc, mood, dna eid. Yrev desserpmi os raf, ekil dna etirovaf tuohtiw a dnoces thguoht. Nod't liaf em ereh, dna nodnaba siht ro gnihtemos ekil taht.
Ytterp erus I'd yrc flesym ot peels fi taht deneppah.
Eciwt.
Ni eno yad.
Revo owt sraey.
Rof eht tser fo ym efil.

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I'm not really working from a reference picture. The biggest changes are that their spines have been realigned for walking upright, and they now have chest boobs instead of crotchboobs. I'll be sure to add more proper description when the main character's attention isn't directed elsewhere and confuse you even further clarify things a bit.

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I'm yetulosba derettalf taht uoy kniht os ylhgih fo ym gnitirw. I'll od ym tseb ot ton tnioppassid uoy. Sa fo thgir won, retpahc owt si gnittis ta erehwemos dnuora ythgie tnecrep enod, dna I epoh ot evah retpahc eerht ydaer erofeb loohcs strats kcab pu ni Yraunaj. Retfa taht, I'll yrt ot dloh flesym ot a retpahc a htnom. Gnihtyreve si dennalp tuo. Ti's tsuj a rettam fo em gnittis nwod dna gnitirw ti.

mmmmmm....... boobies..... I would give anything to be in his position.

3644467
Agreed.
Though it would be better if the author gave us something as a reference.

If this is a parody, I approve. Especially of the clever wordplay, alliteration, and puns.

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If you absolutely have to have a reference pic, you can copy-paste this URL: http://derpibooru.org/493083 (not hotlinked because of borderline NSFW)

While there are a few minor adjustments I would make, it's the closest I could find. I'm deliberately being vague because I would rather let the readers fill in the blanks with whatever appeals to them the most. I've seen too many 'horrors from the uncanny valley' pictures to take the WYSIWYG approach from the ponies in the show. At the same time, I don't want to go full horse either, as that would ruin it for me, and if I ruin it for me, I'm not gonna have any fun writing, and if I'm not having any fun writing, it's not gonna be any good (or it will be even worse than it already is, depending on your current opinion of what I have so far). So, I just think of them as being in a sort of nebulous, undefined middle ground that mixes both pony and humanoid traits that still maintains an appealing mental image.

If that clarifies anything, then that's good :twilightsmile:
If it only confuses you even more, then :rainbowwild:

Is the number a hex color for green? is that why?

Despite the queer title of the story and chapter i shall read on anyways. It's been forever since a good story was posted on Human Harems.

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If you're referring to the human protagonist, I felt that would've been redundant with the 'Human' tag, so I left it off. Other than that, there are no OCs in major roles. Well, there's a minor character in the next chapter, but she only appears once before disappearing.

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oh god, I thought the name sounded familiar :ajbemused:

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Actually, I just picked the name because it has a very special meaning (if you have the maturity of a third-grader)

Richard William Johnson ==> Dick Willy Johnson ==> Penis Penis Penis

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If only I had made a reference to peaches instead of coconuts. But alas, it was too little, too late to alter the course Obselescence set.

what is the title meant to mean? is it a reference to something?

Funny. Well-written. And I like anthro. I approve.

You really do have a great writing style, I much say. A story like this, though it falls under the umbrella of "things I like", could easily be unreadable. And yet this is good. More where this came from, please.

....
Well, I must read on, this is too funny.
Yes, bring me more!

It would have been hilarious if you released this story with the title number being different than the story ID number. Of course, you could always change it anyway.

This is going to be interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Anthro Clopfic #[Story number]

Look in the URL of the story.

Damn, this chapter is gonna give me nightmares. Magicjob gone horribly wrong, ouch... Back to waiting for the next chapter, I guess. From the looks of it it's gonna be worth it :pinkiehappy:.

release all of the magic he absorbed? Are they referring to sex? :rainbowhuh:

Well...that escalated quickly *Sagenods*

Wow, that was...not where I expected this to go.

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