Abuse my love a thousand times, However hard I try, Heartbreaker; your time has come, Can't take your evil way ♫♫♫
In the middle of the night,
When you think you're out of sight.
When you find yourself wandering the streets,
There's one pony you don't want to meet.
Because if you see her,
it means the end for you for sure.
No place is safe from this mare,
so don't try hiding anywhere.
So, criminals, you better watch what you do,
Because Toothpaste Mane is coming for you!
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what....?
One word: Strange...
Also, may I make a suggestion as to the description? Unless you don't want every two lines to rhyme, that is. If I were you, I'd have the second to last line be something like this:
"So, criminals, better watch what you do!"
Disregard this if you think it is fine already/are too lazy to change the description/have a better idea/just don't feel like it.
And remember, always never forget to remember that your writing is awesome. And better than mine. Also, remember that sixes fear you now.
This has gone on too long. To close this, have a Scootaloo, because Scootaloo be awesome.
I find it amazing that the ad below the story is a Colgate® Toothpaste ad. Did you do that?
I admit it, I laughed my fool head off. (I should be able to replace it before continuing to the Add Comment button.)
I like the Colgate poem you made
>Read the short description, chuckle.
>Read the long description. Decidedly “meh”… It’s not an improvement.
>Already here, might as well read the story anyway.
Mission Accomplished I guess?
Liked the story, and while I don’t consider it worthy of a favourite I do consider it worthy of a thumbs‐up.
Very cute.
Liked and favourited.
2961288 Thanks!
colgate best pone
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Aww, that was cute.
Colgate (Minuette) and Vinyl Scratch are sisters??? *Mind blown*
Speaking of minds being blown. Would it be asking too much to see one-shots of those AT&T commercial with the suit asking a few kids a question? Just swap out the Kindergardeners with foals of about the CMC's age. (See? Ponies make everything better!)
Wow, this was a fun read!
Really like the twist that it was all in their heads and the fact that you had them as sisters. I must say this was a nice little one shot.
And what is it about a highly spirited dentist who believes plaque is this world's scum and that the toothbrush is her sword of justice with enamel being her damsel in distress?
In the beginning I was like Yeaaaaah, and in the middle I was like daaaaaaannnnng, but in the end I was like Woooooooaaah.
The story was Tastical, and the twist was adorable.
Dawww
Let's go on a witch hunt for that 1 disliker
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Okay, what loser disliked this?
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2963142 The kind who clearly doesn't care for his life. I mean, you even threatened anyone who did it last night!
2962738 Yes! We must locate this heathen and give him a reason not to mess with us again!
Love! That's getting my thumbs up!
2963333 Thank you!
2963833 You're welcome, you deserve it! Just like my favorite
2962738>>2963142 Now we have TWO people to hunt down
2968675
And shall we have numerous shenanigans such as this?
You can't have a witch hunt for two witches without shenanigans!
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This...just awesome. Also, I'm assuming you already know this, but arcum and I decided on letting people put this in the long description of the approved fic
That ending.
D'aww!
I cannot help but as you said
"Epic Fight Music"
This was the first thing came to my mind:
But a really cool and cute story.
Liked aaaaand faved.