>tfw you realise you're a generic white girl
Celestia learns the hard way how bad it is to be immortal. Her life during the last years of Luna's banishment is her best teacher in this subject. WARNING: Feels may happen. You have been warned.
Cover art by SilverCommando. (No link to his/her page because he/she is banned from deviantART)
Also, yay! 10th story on FIMFiction!
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Will read soon k
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kk hope you like it
Impressive, a few errors that need to be edited but honestly not bad, seriously liked it, did not make me cry but I'm a natural dark writer so it's not supposed to
I liked this, I would suggest you get an editor though, other then that, keep at it, the gods know that immortals suffer such a painful and tragic life
Not a bad ending for this alternate, enjoyed it
Really great story this was. I enjoyed it and both endings particularly the sad ending. Very interesting ending it was.
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Thank you. It was hard for me to write the sad ending what with killing Luna and all. As you can tell by my pic, she /is/ one of my favorite ponies.
WOW! Even the happy ending was sad...
This was moving and powerful. Excellent work.
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Thanks.
A GOOD TWIST ON CELESTIAS' FEELINGS !!!!!
STILL A GOOD ENDING !!!!!