The Day, Defeated

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Princess Luna was corrupted, transforming into Nightmare Moon, the bane of Equestria. Her sister, Princess Celestia, tries to stop her. Needless to say, an epic battle ensues.

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And the Night, Victorious · 25th Nov 2013 · 1,362 words
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Bonus Chapter · 10th Dec 2013 · 647 words
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Lunas Paladin

Lunas Paladin #1 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

Technically the bonus chapter should not be put on this story because one of the requirements was a one shot.

The Accursed One

The Accursed One #2 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

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The bonus was just something random that I thought of and probably couldn't put it into 1k words. DQ the story if you must, but I'm adding the chapter some time next week.

Lunas Paladin

Lunas Paladin #3 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

3539316 You could wait till after I post the thread closing the contest, and it would still qualify.

The Accursed One

The Accursed One #4 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

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So I'd have to wait to add the comedic section featuring Nightmare Sweetie?

Lunas Paladin

Lunas Paladin #5 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

3540360 Only till the ninth.

teneluxes_

teneluxes_ #6 · Jan 25th, 2021 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

The attacks met in the middle between the two ponies. Now, the deciding factor was just each pony’s particular power and stamina. The rainbow got closer to Nightmare, then the darkness got closer to Celestia. It appeared as if the two were locked in a stalemate. That power-lock lasted until the damaged Celestia finally ran out of her internal mana reserves, stopping her attack.

this makes 0 sense
luna, for all her worth, isnt anywhere NEARLY strong enough to fight celestia at all. celestia literally one shotted her to the moon with 1 beam in the fight, never blasting luna.
in their fight in the dream realm, daybreaker obliterated nightmare

make it make sense tf??

teneluxes_

teneluxes_ #7 · Jan 25th, 2021 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

The beam of jet-black chaotic energy enveloped Celestia, making her feel as if ten thousand white-hot spikes were impaling her all at once. The pain was incomparable to anything she had ever felt before, and she knew she had lost. The pain turned to burning as Celestia realized she had been forcibly removed from Equus to the planet’s sun. She did not know how long the banishment would last, or if she would have healing to keep her alive. It turned out she could heal herself so she was alive. Horribly burned permanently, but alive. She thanked the elder gods for her luck.

celestia is immune to fire .-.

teneluxes_

teneluxes_ #8 · Jan 25th, 2021 · · · And the Night, Victorious ·

“Dearest Luna, I forgive you. There’s just one more thing I need to do, though,” Celestia replied in a tone one would use when trying to contain anger when talking to a small child.

a small child?? bruh if shes a small child how tf did she defeat a LITERAL GOD that is able to control the stars themselves when shes just the ruler of a glowing rock???

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