Spike wakes up one morning to find Twilight missing, but a note was left for him. His goal is to adventure throughout his home town of Ponyville, receiving clues as to his friend's location. The question is, will he make it in time?
>tfw you realise you're a generic white girl
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I got a few laughs out of this. It's well written and fun. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks.
Ohhai. Glad I could be of some help on this, as always, keep it up, man. I'm happy that you decided to continue writing even when you weren't sure you wanted to. I know you have talent.
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Thanks, that means quite a bit. The problem now is getting ideas.
*Pushes through hoards of readers, trampling several and panting heavily.*
I"M ONE OF THOSE FRIENDS!
omgzzses sumbit to EQD pl0x!!!1
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Tried to. Failed. Didn't want to fix it up.
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Out of all of your complete stories, this is my favorite!
I laughed a little more than I should have at Twilight's second note to Spike.
When I read, "the pegasus that doesn't fly." I thought it was going to be Scootaloo, not Fluttershy! That part got me.
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Yea! Glad you liked it.
This story has been graded a Turquoise by The Gem Hunters.
It's ok. It's better than most fics, fairly original concept, but there's a severe lack of conflict. Nothing really interesting for Spike to choose, or anything he has to overcome.
Not give any serious feedback on this story since it's a comedy and had me laughing in a few places. Fun little story. "Spikes pudgy." #SpikeWorkoutMontageConfirmed