If cows go "moo", why don't moose go "coo"?
Pinkie Pie. Most ponies know her as the fun loving party pony. Others think she is a crazy unpredictable menace. Pinkie has had her moments, some better than others. Is she really crazy, or is she just misunderstood?
As of 6-13-13 more info added to end. Explains things more. Thanks again for all the support
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Pretty good story.
Like, favorite, and follow!
Very good!
I like this story & it makes life feel less crap for some reason.
Fav & upvote.
I love stories which acknowledge how ridiculous the constant f/f shipping is
Thanks everyone for the positive feedback!
Love this story.
People really do give Pinkie too much of a bad rep.
I'm sorry to say this one really didn't do it for me. I didn't hate the piece- I just didn't much like it either. There really wasn't anything about it to make it interesting to me. Maybe if it had some kind of narrative framing (e.g. casting it as a diary entry or a "Letter to the Editor" of a local paper) it would have been able to grab my imagination. As it is- a straightforward monologue with no context- meh.
I mean we don't even really know what's going on to prompt Pinkie's dialog. Has her fame as an element Bearer prompted the ponies of Equestria to start writing horrible fanfic of her? Did she use her fourth-wall breaking powers to look over some Brony's shoulder as he was reading Cupcakes? Answers to those sorts of questions could give this piece extra zip.
Like I said- I don't hate it. I just feel like this needs something more.
A (very soft) thumbs-down from me.
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Okay you make very good points, i'll try to fix some of thoes things and maybe your vote will change
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I agree with Halfling pony I'm afraid, this isn't really a story. Maybe you could set it in the form of an interview (therapist or journalist) with pinkie (possibly in disguise) discussing her cultural impact (maybe they could be brony/cupcakes author/Lauren Faust or something like that)? That would allow you to use your ideas without distracting from your message?
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Okay, you both are right. I'll fix it as soon as I can, most likely tonight. I should have explained it more.
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Sorry it took so long, but i added some more stuff to the end. Tell me what you think
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It feels more like a story, but I don't really feel that it has much punch to it as it where. But it seems to me that this style of story telling is quite hard to pull off. Anyway thanks for taking my comments into consideration.
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Yeah, this wasn't easy. I probably won't write another like this again. But I do thank you for the comment, and the feedback.
This was about Pinkie Pie's discovery of Fimfiction, apparently. And to be perfectly blunt, I agree with what she's saying (I am so sick of seeing blood thirsty Pinkie Pies.)
Really good story! Have a like and favorite! Cheers
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Thank you! Im so glad you liked it!
The cupcakes fad needs to go NOW! I seriously hated how cupcakes made her look bad
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=StFfXP4eAgU