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RainbowFlash96


If cows go "moo", why don't moose go "coo"?

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Everyone knows what happens to your favorite ponies when they're on screen, but what are they doing behind the scenes?

A retelling of what happens off screen during every episode.


Teen for suggestions of drinking and possibly drugs. Also very random: you have been warned.
I don't condone most of the behavior in this story, it's just for some laughs.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 29 )

I'm sure lots of us have thought of doing this at some point. Kudos to you for following through with it. Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

I get the reference, unfortunately. I never liked that show, though, so I'm not going to dignify it with an identification. Plus, its wording fits a bit awkwardly, so even if I did like it, I don't think it would work.

The problem with this story is that it doesn't go far enough. This is the kind of story that really needs to go overboard in order to work. You have a "Random" tag, so make it random! Mix things up a bit more, and add more variety to your jokes. For example, you have Celestia making her best decisions while drunk. That's fine, I guess. When that gets old, then what? Will you stop using Celestia? Running gags don't work too well in the long run without plenty of other gags in between uses. Otherwise, it's just the same thing over and over again.

It's still early enough in the story to prevent these issues before they become problems, though.

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Thanks for the advice, I'll make sure it doesn't become overused.


3828477
Thanks:pinkiehappy: I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

BANISHMENT SPELL!

nice. I like this.

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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying this:twilightsmile:

:rainbowlaugh: sombody make drunk celestia a thing in this fandom like molestia

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Ha, that would be kind of funny :rainbowlaugh:

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Yup, I couldn't pass up the opportunity:rainbowkiss:

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Don't worry, there will be more. I'm almost done with the next chapter! Just you wait, it's going to get pretty random:trollestia:

I like this. A lot. :pinkiehappy: :trollestia:

Im liking this so far. Cant wait to read next chapter

A magical bean shot out of Celestia's horn

Best. Typo. Ever. :rainbowlaugh:

Also, nice Despicible 2 reference. :pinkiehappy:

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Now the question is do I change it or leave it as bean...?:rainbowderp:
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Thanks!:yay:

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Yes, and that war would go down in history:pinkiesad2:

From a newspaper. :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:
Eh, seems legit

:pinkiehappy: This was awesome!

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Thank you so much:twilightsmile: I'll try to not have a 4 month wait for the next one :rainbowderp:

I really like Rainbow Dash's Diary! And Celestia swooping in and ransacking the dragon's hoard was also cool.

Funniest thing I've read today's So far.

Big mac's dream made me almost die of laughter.

Celestia started to sweat and look around the room nervously, "Maybe... but enough of this- FREEZE RAY!"
A magical beam shot out of Celestia's horn, but Nightmare Moon was able to dodge it.
"Celestia, I would have thought that by now you would have learned not to say a spell before you cast it. It gives your opponent time to dodge."
A darker beam of magic shot out of Nightmare Moon's horn and nailed Celestia square in the muzzle.
"BANISHMENT SPELL!!!" Nightmare Moon sung.

You're dethpicable. All my yes.

I have a question: do you want me to do updates on the new episodes as they come out? or just keep going in the order of the actual show?

Do Both! Start a seperate thing for the newer episode, but keep going in order with this one

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True, once had the thought of making a story liek this, sort of. althoug was more pony actors taking the place of the real character inthe show somehwo thank to discord.

Umm, what is "C.R.A.B.S"? And what is the "smoke"?

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