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RainbowFlash96


If cows go "moo", why don't moose go "coo"?

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Pinkie Pie just kept eating sweets. Eventually it caught up with her.... Now she's over three hundred pounds. Can her friends help her stay on track with her new diet?
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Note: AU only because no alicorn Twilight, so it disregards season 3 finale.
I did not make cover art, I got it from google. If you know who made this I would be more than happy to credit them.

Thanks to The Myth once again for the plot. You should really check out his stories, they're great!

Thanks also to Glaze for giving me help on my writing method/style, and for proofreading. It's been a big help!

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Comments ( 60 )

This concept is already done by someone else

2525006 many concepts have been done by someone else lol every second fic is a human in equestria story.... :)

I loved pinkie blob....I figure she has great metabolism and that's how she keeps her figure or on the other hand...because Lauren Faust knows that nobody wants to see a 325lb pinkie lol

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Probably both are true. i just think it's funny to see a big fat pink blob. But maybe thats just me. :rainbowlaugh:

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I think that Pinkie Pie has learned to control and master the power of black holes and secretly has one in her stomach. :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiesick: i thought that pinkie kept from getting fat by jumping around all the time:rainbowwild:

Despite the fact this had been done before and that it needs to be re edited not to mention be given background on how all this even happened more to the point of how Pinkie is even ALIVE, I shall be watching this, I got to admit stories like these catch my eye sometimes, just please make her be much more serious when she turns back into her normal self some how because it's going to end with rainbow and sunshine....all rated everybody fics do:ajbemused:

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To tell you the truth, I though everybody fics ment there was just no bad language or actions :applejackconfused:

2535868 :rainbowlaugh:Nah bro, that's 100% wrong, even more so with all my own stories, mine never go below teen and are very dark or realistic, I can't write a rainbow and sunshine story to save my life, no joke. You just got to look for certain fics, you're welcome to look over mine if you wish:twilightsmile:

I love this story! Please continue it! :twistnerd: :pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::yay::eeyup::twilightsheepish::moustache::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: And i will don't worry, after this week school is over and i can have time to write.:pinkiehappy:

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Yay:yay:! I can't wait til then! :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

Ok. Ive waited a month now. :ajbemused:. When are you going to get that update done? :trixieshiftright: :unsuresweetie: :eeyup: :facehoof: :rainbowderp: :twilightangry2: :pinkiecrazy: :flutterrage: :ajbemused: :applejackunsure: :applejackconfused: :coolphoto:. I love these faces! Too bad their isn't an Octavia one.

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Sorry bout that.:raritydespair: It's going up today give me like one more hour. :scootangel:

I always thought Pinkie would GIVE somepony a heart attack not have one!
Excitement!

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Ha! yeah I'm surprised that hasn't happened yet :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

Ok, I've waited over and hour! When are you going to make another update!?! :pinkiehappy:

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I see what you did there.:trixieshiftright:

But seriously, i have no idea, i know exactly whats going to happen but i go to write and i just get so distracted. It literally takes me forever to write anything. I'll try not to take a month this time. :twilightblush:

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When I write essays or papers at school, I go back and revise after a paragraph or two. This also helps you focus, getting a short break often.

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Thanks, I think that might help! :pinkiehappy:

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It also helps save time. :raritywink:

You made Pinkie have a heart attack... YOU MONSTER!!!! :flutterrage:

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It's alright... But she damn well better recover... :pinkiecrazy:

Well it was bound to catch up to her eventually.

Rarity's characterization in this chapter is horrible.

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Sorry, you think that way. Is there anything I can do to make it better?

Now I want to know Snowflake's deal.

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:rainbowlaugh: Snowflake will have his time, all will be revealed. :derpyderp2:

Just a heads-up: "Can her friends help her stay on tract with her new diet?" (in the fic description) should be changed to "Can her friends help her stay on track with her new diet?"

Good story, by the way.

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Oops.:facehoof: Thanks for catching that.:twilightsheepish:

I'm glad you like the story too! :pinkiehappy:

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Ha, you cant kill Pinkie! She's invincible! :pinkiesmile:

Took me about 7 minutes to read this entire chapter :ajbemused:. And who's idea was it with the new writing method? I recal it was a fellow victim of ADD and she was a very fast reader. Oh and I remember she is a Lyra loving fan? Ring a bell? :twilightblush:

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Sorry, but I have no idea what you mean. :fluttershysad:

EDIT: Oh! Now I know! You changed your username! Hehe, sorry bout that. Pulled a fast one on me!

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Hehe :rainbowlaugh:. Ohhh Trixie should be replaced by a master of tricks! :trixieshiftleft: . And I change my username about once every week or so... I'm going to try to stick with Glaze though. I was going to do *cough*bloodybubbles*cough* but realized it would be bad for the...little...people :twilightblush:... Let's just hope they don't choose to call me Glazed Donut. :ajbemused:. Anyways, tell me if you ever need help writing :twilightsmile:. Try to think your writing an essay for school, and it's due by the end of the day or so. And for the last chapter, PLEASE, make it longer than 2,000 words!!!!! It literally only takes me 1 minute to read 100 words :unsuresweetie:...

And it would be great if you could show some kindness and mabey give me credit for the writing tips? :duck: if you don't mind, that is... :fluttershysad:

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I like the name Glaze, I think you should keep it. I'll be sure to let you know if I need any help in the future, and I will try to make the last chapter as long as I can.:fluttershysad:

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Of course, I can't believe I forgot. You helped me a lot, sorry for forgetting:fluttercry: It's up there now:pinkiehappy:

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I use Glaze for roleplaying sites and such when I have several avatars. And the reason I ador Lyra, is because ever since I read Background Pony, there was something in commen I had with Lyra, we both have great memory and barly noone can remember us. In my case, new people I meet can't remember me at all :twilightblush:. And if you ever need a proof reader or more writing ideas, I'm open :raritywink:

Hehe! First comment! :pinkiehappy:

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Well? How do you write faster?

And YEAH! Snowflake!

You don't think Pinkie and Snowflake are.............nah.

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In the magical comments of comments :moustache:! Just go to the main page of the story and look at the comments from awhile ago :ajbemused:. AND IF YOU USE MY MEATHOOD, GIVE ME CREDIT OR I WILL SEND PINKAMENA DIANE PIEINTOYOURNIGHTMARES AND SHE WILL TERRIOSE YOUR SOUL:pinkiecrazy::flutterrage:!!! Have a nice day! :twilightsmile:

What do you know. Snowflake actually has a plot line.

Very inspiring story. I really like it.

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Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

The CMC helping her out? OH GODS, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!:facehoof:

Holy shit, she got a heart attack, well that's what she gets, not going to say anything nice about it, NEXT!

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