After being told that she wasn't "bird" enough for Gilda,Fluttershy seeks out her lavender friend for a little bit of magical help. The spell fails, but everything seems to go better than expected for the yellow pegasus. She's strong, confident and loud......Really loud.
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... What?
Sex automatically requires a mature tag.
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Not for the past couple months, Knighty and Co. decided that you can use the sex and gore tags for T rated fics
3062389And then they slept with each other the next day.... I dont find that in anyway a reason to add a mature tag. ( That was an example. I dont know if thats in the story )
3062389 It'll just be lewd jokes from Flutterharpy. I thought that mature coupled with the sex tag referred to actual sex.
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... Really? Weird. Ah well, in any case.
This looks like it'll be a fun read.
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Tell me about it
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For most of my time here, the sex tag is only really used when there's actual sex, but apparently that changed recently.
I wanna say the spel went horribly wrong and she turned into a frog so I did.
i like it
Interesting Gilda. I like how you portrayed my favorite griffin as bitchy, and I like how she tried to let Fluttershy down gently. The speed of her put-down bothered me, though, and generally, the pacing was a problem for me--a little too speedy. Then again, this all probably happened within the span of 30 minutes or so, so yeah. A little more description and lingering views on scenes would be nice, methinks.
Anyway, interesting concept. I like the joke with the chapter title, and the spell going wrong in this manner fascinates me. That it is GildaShy, even one-sided, piqued my interest but Flutterharpy has me watching this like a hawk. (Not sorry. Also, no, I will not be; I'm lazy.)
I do hope you revisit this one day.
More chapters please
3063026 AGREED