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After being attacked by a mysterious assailant in the Everfree Forest, Pinkie Pie discovers that her wounds may leave a scar on her cutie mark. She remains optimistic about her recovery until Twilight's research reveals that any sort of physical trauma that affects a cutie mark's appearance may foreshadow a change in that pony's destiny. Pinkie struggles to fight incoming negativity as she ponders whether making everypony smile is her true purpose in life.

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A truly intriguing premise. (And, as always, Twilight finds the dark cloud in front of the silver lining.) Sign me up for the rest of this.

I really like this story, I've never seen anything like it! :pinkiehappy: Keep on going!

Wow, this sounds like a REALLY intriguing and fascinating concept. I love it when people have ideas like this.

Fascinattting! :pinkiesmile:

aww nooooo.............
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Wow that was brutal. Poor Pinkie pie she didn't deserve that. :pinkiesad2:

Nice job breaking it Twilight, you just couldn't keep your big mouth shut could you? :facehoof:

Now look what you did to Pinkie Pie, you may have put all of Eqeustria in danger. :twilightoops:

:pinkiehappy:!!!!!!!!!!!!FACONATINGAMAZINGAWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think this story has a good premise. Keep writing.

Comment posted by ambaharmony deleted Feb 18th, 2013

After the most recent episode this story becomes even more interesting as the show seems to make it clear that the ponies treat their marks as manifestations of destiny (even if it may not be true).

Wow, I feel really sorry for Pinkie.

When I read stories, I often picture myself in the characters' situations. Here, it makes me wonder what I'd need a cutie mark for. Do we not choose what we want to do with our lives? If a symbol on my body represented that then it wouldn't be a problem, at all, but the big thing is that cutie marks appear to have more precedence than that. You may never change what you want to do with your life, but the thought that you wouldn't be able to, anyway is devastating.

I had the same feeling when I watched the season finale. Twilight is now an alicorn. She is not a unicorn, anymore. She will never go back. Ever. Twilight will be an alicorn princess for the rest of her life(and a life that may last for hundreds of years, at that). Even now when I think about it, it still seems hypnotically fake, like the foretelling rumor still in it's infancy.

But that's really unrelated.

Back to the story: You did a great job at putting Pinkie's distress into perspective. I can really feel her sense of pain and suffering which is why I feel so sorry for her. It's so out-of-character for her, too, which adds even more contrast. I am very interested in new chapters and hopefully something good happens to her. :pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy:

See Twilight you should've kept your big mouth shut and everything would've been fine. :facehoof:

I love it. Please write more! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

More violence please:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:pinkiesmile

Oh wow I love that. Let's keep reading.

Oh CMON. I've been reading fics all day, and each one was super good, but written years and years ago and discontinued.

It's so upsetting.

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