• Published 7th Jun 2013
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Just Another Gay Day - FlutterDash777



Join the main six as they discover each others life stories about coming out, acceptance, being who you are, and how to correctly eat a pie.

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Is This Really The End?

-Is This Really The End?

"I guess it's getting kind of late." Twilight looked up to the sky to see that Celestia's sun was beginning to set.

"Hm. It seems to be." Rarity looked up from Applejack to confirm.

The friends hadn't even noticed how long they had been telling stories. Time had flew by so fast, it felt as if they had just gotten there.

Rainbow Dash stretched her wings as she began to sit up on her hooves. She yawned slightly and then she turned to help Fluttershy up as well.

"I guess I should be getting home." Rainbow said as she turned to Fluttershy.

"Home? Oh....right." Fluttershy quickly interpreted what Rainbow meant by "home".

"Well....." Rainbow looked back towards her four remaining friends.

"I guess we will be leaving now. See you guys later?" Rainbow asked as she started to flap her wings, prepping them for flight.

"Sure." Twilight reassured as she noticed her two pegasi friends were in quite a hurry. She nearly gagged at the thoughts her mind was throwing at her in the explanation of the two's rushing behavior.

"I should be off as well. I need to go to Opal." Rarity got up as her two other friends flew off in the direction of Fluttershy's cottage. She puffed at her mane slightly as if trying to fix any stray hairs that were possibly floating around unattended.

"Of course." Twilight answered back to her unicorn friend.

"Thank you again for the picnic, Pinkie Pie. It was lovely." Rarity said her farewells as she started off only to be quickly reunited with Applejack who was now following behind her.

"Uh...yeah! See ya guys later!" Applejack called out as she caught up with the white unicorn.

Twilight could hear the two laughing lovingly as they trotted off towards town. She smiled slightly as she turned to Pinkie Pie who was now starting to pack all her things into a basket.

"Need any help?" Twilight asked as she remembered she had nothing to rush home to. Spike was suppose to be taking care of things back at the library and he had Owlicious to help him out as well, so Twilight had no need to run off in a hurry.

"Sure!" Pinkie smiled as she let her friend help her pack her things together.

"It was a nice day to have a picnic...and all the stories were nice to hear too." Twilight began as she tried to small talk with her happy-go-lucky friend.

It wasn't really like Twilight, but she couldn't help but feel like she was left out of the whole discussion earlier as her friends reminisced about their childhoods together and how they were able to find love within each other. It was nice to know and learn about, Twilight would agree, but she couldn't help but feel the slightest bit upset.

She wasn't able to give any story to her friends and she couldn't help but let that thought linger in her head. She never knew any of her friends when she was younger so she didn't have any stories to tell them that they could relate to. Sure, she had stories about her fillyhood, but they weren't really anything interesting. Did her friends find her to be boring?

Twilight looked down thoughtfully. Her mind wondered in the direction of her friends not finding any interest in her. All Twilight ever did was sit back and listen to her friends memories when she had none of her own to share.

"What 'cha thinking about?" Pinkie Pie's eyes perked up at the sight of Twilight.

Twilight jerked her head upwards at the sudden voice of the pony she had forgotten she was with at the moment. Pinkie's voice brought her back to reality.

"Oh, nothing." Twilight smiled as she tried to seem as if nothing was wrong.

Though, when Twilight thought about it again, she realized it was too silly to believe something like that. Of course her friends didn't think she was boring just because she had no love story to tell them. When Twilight thought about it even more, she realized that Pinkie Pie didn't tell a story either, which really relieved her in more ways then one.

"You seem so deep in thought!" Pinkie giggled as she packed the rest of her belongings up. She set the basket down next to her and just stared at Twilight as if waiting intently for a response.

"Oh, I was just thinking about a story I could tell next time we all get together like this." Twilight tried to make something up so she wouldn't seem too suspicious.

"You're right. I would like to hear a story from you too!" The pink pony jumped up with excitement.

"Yeah..." Twilight's large purple eyes glimmered as she smiled back at her pink friend.

"I would like to hear one from you too." Twilight said back.

Pinkie Pie looked up in consideration. She smiled as she looked back down at Twilight.

"Maybe....we could make one together."

Twilight was startled by Pinkie's response. What was that suppose to mean? What kind of story? Twilight wasn't sure but whatever it was Pinkie didn't seem like she was going to explain.

Pinkie Pie got up from her position and grabbed her basket as if she were going to head back home herself.

"Leaving?" Twilight asked as she watched Pinkie get up.

"Yeah." The pink pony said without turning around to look at the unicorn.

Twilight was a bit confused. She didn't know what was up with the sudden change in attitude from her friend, but Pinkie was very unpredictable and that didn't really surprise Twilight all that much.

"Oh, okay."

Twilight looked down with a bit of disappointment in her eyes. She wasn't exactly sure, but she always felt happy whenever she was around Pinkie Pie. It wasn't just the fact that Pinkie brought joy to everypony she met either, it was more like a peace of mind whenever Pinkie was around. Twilight felt relief when she was in the earth ponies company, but now Pinkie had to leave, and Twilight knew she couldn't keep her forever.

"I guess I will see you later then." Twilight said without getting up from the ground she was seated at.

"I guess....or....you could come with me?" Pinkie turned around and gave Twilight a quick wink. She then burst into a fit of giggles like she sometimes would and this sent chills down Twilight's back.

Twilight nodded her head slowly and began to stand next to Pinkie.

"Let's go together." Pinkie smiled as she offered one hoof to Twilight.

The purple unicorn hesitated for a moment, but then soon accepted the hoof with her own.

Twilight wasn't exactly sure where this was going, but she was glad she was going, where ever it was, with Pinkie Pie.

The End?

Comments ( 17 )

Aww... It's the end... And there I was thinking there was going to be a twipie story next up.

Great story. Seems to me that pinkie is going to be dropping some hints from now on.


Gee what was fluttershy and dash running off...? :rainbowwild: leaves a Little too much to my imagination ...

2722766 Glad you liked it! Sorry for the disappointment with the twipie :pinkiecrazy::twilightblush: I just love to keep people guessing!
I'm pretty sure you can guess what Flutters and Dash are going to go do :yay::rainbowkiss::heart:.....

Sleep :rainbowlaugh:
Or maybe not :rainbowwild:

2722896 by the urgency... it was almost as if they were flying home to try for a foal. :rainbowwild::yay:

I defiantly look forward to more stories from you. :scootangel:

2723483 Maybe they were :rainbowlaugh:
I sure hope you keep a look out for new stories by me in the future! :pinkiehappy:

2723553 you're one of the few I follow. Aside from Flutterdash, Ive backed out from MLP and the brony community. So I certainly will be looking forward to whatever you write.

2723567 Aw, that's a shame :applejackunsure: But I'm glad you're sticking to FlutterDash :yay::rainbowkiss:

2723813 of couse I will be :pinkiehappy: Thats why im one of the Flutterdash group admins :rainbowwild::yay:

It's over? aww man, and I was expecting a little TwiPie story too. Oh well, all good things must come to an end right?

2724115 FlutterDash is just too good to give up :twilightsheepish:
2725974 Sorry for the disappointment. Though I will be working on a new story soon :scootangel:

This was very enjoyable to read. I liked all of the stories. And I didn't mind the so-called "fluff" at the beginning! I thought it was cute. :twilightsmile:

2784048 Well at least someone liked it :raritystarry::heart:

Now I'm not going to say this is a bad story, because it isn't. It was a nice little feel good thing but the thing is... I just feel it's to simple and rushed. You got all these stories about coming out and finding love but it's just to simple I feel. Life is a very complex thing and if you were trying to make a depiction of the world we live in then I feel that this story doesn't have enough depth to it. Things just happen, people figure things out then happy ending. But I just don't feel that people act this way, now I'm not going to say that every person out there has a similar way of thinking because everyone is different with their own houghts and ideas and I feel that needs to be adressed. For instance, we are brought for most our lives and most of us believe that the end goal of life is to end up happy with a husband or wife and a family to call our own with a relatively successful life. But some people get these feelings and they sometimes don't know wether to embrace them or suppress them or somwhere in between, again I'm not trying to generalize thought but I'm trying to put something out there so people have least an idea to go off of. So I think this story did not just accurately depict the complexity of thought and emotion, that's not to say this story didn't at least try because I saw a bare bones idea of what I'm trying to get across in rarity/applejack chapter but it didnt really hit it for me. So by the end of I've I just said (mostly because I can't really think of anything else to say), I just feel this story did not really explore the complexities of thought. I'm not trying to stop this story from being liked, I just feel it wasn't right for me.

I do aplogize if all that was confusing or not well thought out, just kinda happens when I write stuff like that so if anyone wants to question what I've said or clarify something then I'd be happy to try and do so.

2858383 Well thank you for your feedback and honesty. I understand completely of what you are saying, and I do agree with it. This story is not one that really takes things deeper into reality of what would most likely occur in this types of situations. That may be true, however, this is really just one of those, like you said, feel good stories. It isn't one that I took too far like I usually would. This was just a little short story that I through out there. It was more like an experiment, you could say. I never have written anything quite like this before, I am more use to writing deep romance and tragic happenings. I just wanted to try something a little different for a change and I can see how this story really isn't the best that it could be. But please understand that I really wasn't trying all too hard with this one. It was just to pass the time. If you want something more in depth, I would suggest reading some of my other fanfictions. Most of them are romance and a lot of them are dark and tragic, however, some of them do have that happy ending, but not most. Thanks again, and I do hope you will give my stories another chance :twilightsheepish:

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I completely understand what your saying, sometimes after writing deep, introspective stories you just wanna write something simple for once. I can appreciate that, I could never do it myself as I think about every single thing I do and simplicity is not something I'm good at. I will take a look at your other fics as I am actually reading your latest one right now. So good luck and thanks for the thoughtful answer.

2859740 Great. Thanks for understanding. I hope you find my other stories to be of more interest :twilightsheepish:

This was so beautiful :'3, a great story every part, or should i say all of them?

THAT.... WAS ADORABLE! Kudos to you!

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