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After long years of playing for royal festivities in Canterlot, Octavia's musical skills start to plummet. She still has the talent, but she has no motivation, or inspiration to move on any further with her career. After meeting another musically inclined pony, Octavia start's to feel her inspiration kicking in, and she starts to fully understand why it has.

On the other hoof, Vinyl Scratch discovers what the power of music can truly do, and how friendship can only go but so far before it turns into something much more.

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Comments ( 73 )

This is good now i am waiting for good update i wish this continue also 1.bp.blogspot.com/-_TkbcIBMy1Y/T2Ioh3r-T_I/AAAAAAAABGA/BAJcgUhFm7c/s1600/firstpost.jpg

just wondering... is there any Flutterdash in this? :pinkiehappy:

Very good first chapter, though I noticed a few problems with grammar. All in all, this is a good story


1699523 Thank you :heart:
1699543 I will see if I can fit some in :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:
1699547 Thank you! I will see if I can fix any errors :heart:
1699476 Thank you! I'm deffinately continuing this one for a while :yay:

For some reason, I have a feeling that OctavScratch will come along next chapter... Oh, and, uh, FIRST! FIRST COMMENT!

Aha :twilightsmile: And what makes you guess that? :twilightblush: Haha We will have to see :heart::raritywink:

Wow... This is gettin' good! Keep 'em coming, please!

Do they know each other from early in life? Hmmm....

Hmmm, that's interesting.

woot more developement

I love Voctavia (Need to come up with a better name for a Vinyl/Octavia pairing.) Please keep it up!

Wow... this shit... this shit right here... is getting deep..... But, wait a second... just how OLD are Vinyl and Octavia in this story, then?:rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss:

1730133 OctiveScratch? lol I tried :rainbowlaugh:
1731966 Thanks :pinkiehappy: But they're around 18 I guess...Well Octavia is actually a little bit older than Vinyl. I didn't really think of an actual age for them, so I'm just going to say Octavia is either 19 or 20, and Vinyl is 18 :twilightsheepish::heart:

::1732023 Yeah, that sounds good. At least it'll make sense in the story, and maybe it'll avoid making Octavia sound like a lesbian pedo when OctaviaScratch is finally fully introduced LOL:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Also, this is a really good story... SO YOU GET SIXTEEN MUSTACHES! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1732042 I wouldn't want her to sound like that at all! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: But thank you for the mustaches! Woot! It means a lot :heart::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

1732079 Of course! You deserve all the mustache in the universe for writing these! They're so... So many feelings are brought up to me by this! I think it's cute, beautiful, sad, odd, interesting.... all sorts of things! I love your work! Thank you so much for writing! U AM GENIUS! :heart::heart::heart::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightangry2::twilightblush::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

1732112 Well that just really made my day! :pinkiehappy: I'm very extremly happy that you seem to like my stories. :yay: I want to become a writer one day, so I love it when I hear my stories are good :heart: I also love to bring out the emotional feel in my stories. I really enjoy writing that way :rainbowkiss: I hope you continue to read my stories, and check out any that I write later :twilightsmile:

so vinyl stole octavia's first kiss, i liked hearing the thoughts on both their sides

Vinyl kept her word.:twilightsmile:

Flutterdash777, just... thank you, so much for your work. It brings me to tears how great it is. I'm inspired to write my own fanfics on this site by authors like you. Personally, my stories suck, and yet I keep writing them. I want to try and get better at writing them, in hopes that, one day, I'll be able to write stories as good as this. Also, I am not just getting overexcited with your stories; I REALLY mean that! I just... My dream in life isn't to be an author, but I hope to be a great author with fanfics! Thank you for your genius! MUSTACHIO! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1735834 I thought it would be a nice touch :twilightsmile:
1735842 She sure did :pinkiehappy:
1736275 You really know how to make someponies day :pinkiehappy: I'm glad that I inspire you to write, and I'm sure if you keep on trying you will deffinataly improve :rainbowkiss: I used to not be a very good writer either, but I just kept practicing, and writing, and eventually I started to write better :heart::raritywink:

1738314 Thank you for your support and kind words towards my writing! And I understand if you say no, but if you get a chance, please read the stories I've got up. They're books 1 and 2 of my series Celestial Love, and I've got chapter 1 of book 3 up

1739499 Any time! :pinkiehappy: And of course I will check them out :twilightsmile: Once I finish this chapter up, tonight I will take a look at yours :raritywink::heart::yay:

1740487 Thanks so much! Just to let you know, I'd like it if you were to criticize me without any restraint if there's something you think deserves a little criticizm. When I'm criticized, it let's me know I have trouble with it, and so I know I can improve it someway some how! :heart::rainbowkiss: :eeyup: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1740983 Of course! Constructional criticism is always a helpful thing :twilightsmile: I will surely let you know if you need some help in a particular place within your stories :twilightsheepish:

1741557 Alright than, again thanks!

Yes! New chapter! Time to read...:heart:

My God... Thank you, my God, my God, thank you, my God, thank you! OctaviaScratch is finally being introduced! I've been waiting for it! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1743415 Thank ya kindly :ajsmug:

1745732 Glad you liked it! :heart: I just put the last chapter up :twilightsmile:

1746131 Oh darn, great book! I knew it would have to eventually, but... I don't want it to end!

1746204 I'm sorry it had to end, but everything does :fluttercry: But make sure to check out my new stories that I will be writing soon :twilightsheepish:

"Octavia's mouth was agate" - - - Should be "agape". Only mistake I found, but I felt you should know. :raritywink:

Wonderful story, all in all, however.

1746805 Oh yes, I plan on doing so soon! :heart: Also, I re-posted my story the first part of my story. I don't plan on bothering you, but I've got the first chapter up, and I was hoping you could read the re-post once it's all up. I'm so sorry to bother you with that :fluttershyouch:

My God, I finally decided to read the last chapter and let the joy end, and I love your story. Please, make some kind of sequel to this! I know genius stories are hard to write for anybody, but you are brilliant, and for some reason, I just want to read more of the relationship of OctavScratch by you. I love your art! The only story that has made me shed more tears is My Little Dashie! :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: I am in love with your work!

1746928 My mistake :raritydespair: Thanks for letting me know I will fix that :twilightsmile: Glad you liked it :heart:
1746937 I will definitely read your new one :twilightblush: and I will try to see if I can make one, though there's no promises, sometimes I get to the point in my stories where I can't add on to them, but I will see what I can do :twilightsmile: And I'm glad you enjoyed it so well :heart::heart:

Aww man that was so cute why must it end. But I did enjoy it very much. :)

Short but sweet and a nice wrap up I think.

Fantastically written, couldn't ask for a better ending.

1820704 I'm glad you think so :twilightsheepish: Thanks for taking your time to read it :pinkiehappy::heart:

So far I'm really enjoying this story! i figure i leave a comment because middle chapters don't seem to get many ^^

"Thank you for coming Miss Octavia. You were slendid. " << i did see you forgot the p so i wanted to let you know :P

I'll comment on the last chapter after i finish!

And also flutterdash is one of the best ships :D

Wow. I really love this story. Such a beautify written pair OctavScratch. I just love this paring so much, one of the best background pairs.

Thank you for a great read. I'm excited to read more of your work!

Also someone else mentioned it but another story with OctavScratch or just tavvy would be fantastic! :yay:

1884252 I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for pointing that out, I will fix it right away! FlutterDash is the best of course :yay::heart::rainbowkiss: And my upcoming story has OctivScratch in it, but it is mainly focused around Lyra, and Bon Bon :twilightsmile:

Yeah i may have stalked your blog post about that already. :yay: I'm excited, when do you think you will be finished with that?

1884640 That's perfectly fine! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: And I'm not really sure on a set date, because I'm not sure how long I'm going to make it. Maybe by the end of the week. Maybe sooner, or maybe longer :twilightoops: I still can't say for sure, but I will try to not make the wait too long :twilightsmile:

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