First Lieutenant John "Aquila" Killinger was on a less than routine patrol flight, when he was somehow teleported to a different planet. Little does he know, he is the last hope for the inhabitants of this strange world.
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would be hilarious if luna was shooking with barely hiden pleasure
A ponies worst nightmare. A pissed off Marine DI. That was brilliant.
now THAT is getting an upvote!!
Sweet fucks ahoy can I double upvote this shit? This was fucking gold mate!
Hahahah!
I want more of the Gunny! Was this based of R. Lee. Ermey? I don't care how repetitive the actual training is I want to see this happen again and again! Just plz no Pile
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this line. this sold it for me.
YES
GOD, I love Drill Sergeants. Reminds me of when I went to Basic. True it was Army Basic but still.
I ship Luna/Johnsion
One minor thing... a USMC NCO is NEVER just called "Sergeant" unless he is an E-5. A Staff Sgt is called Staff Sgt, a Gunnery Sgt is called Gunnery Sgt or Gunny, etc etc.
This is quite possibly one of the most hilarious things I've ever read.
Mate, I all most coughed up a lung laughing so hard at what Luna asked after the Gunny left.
7991536 Noted. I'll go back and fix that. That was one of the few things I was a bit confused about, but I figured that if it was wrong someone would eventually correct me.
7991213 Eh, a little, maybe. There was some inspiration in there, but I wanted him to be as original as possible. As for training arcs, I can say that there will be one more, later on in the story. I was sort of using this chapter as a test-bed to determine whether or not everyone would like it or not. So far, it has turned out better than I thought it would.
This kinda chapters are among the best!
HOLY SHIT YES THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO FREAKING HARD!!!!
This is the 7th time I'm rereading the Gunny scene, I SWEAR that this never gets old!
Dude....like....did you know someone like that or are you just that good? Because that was a really well done gunny part....and it was funny too
7999323 I don't know anyone that's like that, but I also don't think I'm that good. Spent some time on google, found some stuff, and tailored it to meet my needs. I did have the occasional stroke of genius, but unfortunately I wasn't able to fit a lot of it into this chapter. I did write it down though, so it'll make an appearance later on.
I will say that it's fun to get into the mindset, then run around the house insulting random household objects.
8000023 f35 is now get replace it now Boeing x32 ! sorry m8.
7998409 Web lad, threats, no matter how fanciful and unattainable they are for you, bar unless you're an A-10 pilot yourself (bravo if so), are a tad bit too far. Getting this personal over an on the fly angry review is strange enough.
8000040 pls kill me nao...
I died... 10/10 more m8
8000040 also x32 more like XD i mean look at this thing.
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And the f35 is the pancaked x32
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nationalinterest.org/files/main_images/1280px-F-35_at_Edwards.jpg
Eh A-10 still my favorite.
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8000154 or replace by Textron AirLand Scorpion
i love warthog still and flown one. but time are need new aircraft against a new enemy!
7992243 i know this has probably been said but you would not call a marine drill instructor just a sergeant now army on the other hand if you called them anything but drill sergeant you got fucking destroyed with pt
8000837 I know, and it will be fixed. I tend to have brain farts when writing past 0200.
8000837 so should I call him T.I.? XD...
8000168 ah no pls mah dreams are being ruined, i will never get to fly an A10, my only point is that I like the A10 better. Its a personal preference. Also here have a run on sentence.
7991416 XD YES PLS
8002081 sorry but time run out for A-10 Thunderbolt It services time it end. But your dream can still can achieve because there private collect who if pay will let people fly them. If they been flying with a enough time under there wings.
A10 is running out of time. It sad the a10 get replaced but. It serves time is running out. We new planets to support our troops. But your goal is not over you rent a a10 warthog for private collector.
For 18,000$ days/ flying time. Only if have the right amount of time flight time under your wings.
I cant wait to see more of his planes' sentient interaction with everyone.
Ohhhhhh Man!!!!I already feel sorry for these poor pony cadets.Pissing off A United States Marine D.I.Big Mistake.
8002141
Don't really see why it has to go as of yet, it can hold a lot of ordinance and it has that stupid powerful 30mm cannon, plus it is cheeaaaaap as hell. (relatively speaking)
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I blame politicians wanting progress for the sake of progress. They're tired of the same toys in their toy box, so instead of getting a newer model of the same thing, they want the shiny one in the window that can "do everything".
A sort of "Jack of All" vs "King of One" scenario. Not that I think the F-35 is a Jack. More like a 5.
why is this so funny like, it just is for no reason why whyyyy, i almost got busted at work becuase i was reading this