Jun
24th
2015

Howdy, ya'll! Like adventure? Like TwiDash? Like intrigue? Action? Well have I a treat for you -- Legionnare: Death of Innocence by my friend, The Lord Inquisitor.

Princess Twilight Sparkle has sent on a mission to resolve a diplomatic mission with Equestria's ancient rival, the powerful Khanate, with everything teetering on the brink of a calamitous war as loyalties are tested and intrigue rules the day, where not even a king is truly in charge of even his own castle. Nothing is as it seems in a world half tipped into madness. She isn't alone, however, being joined by elder statesmen Diplomatic Incident, the tempered Khan zealot Prophet, and under the protection of the ninth company of the Equestrian Legion, led by her old flame, Rainbow Dash, with whom she still has unfinished business. Against them are arrayed shadowy forces from both without and within. They only know for sure is that that failure is not an option, and the deeper they delve, the more tangled the web becomes and the thinner become the fine lines they must walk, and the dearer the price for failure.

Read this and more in The Lord Inquisitor's Legionnaire: Death of Innocence.

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#234 · 1w, 4d ago · · ·

So I'd like to make a little comment about your stories and make take on them.  If you don't want some fan critic's opinion feel free to delete me now.




So you didn't delete me so I'd like to talk about your stories.  I just finished reading all 41 of them over the past week. Starting with the beginning and working forward.  As it seems to me you have one ongoing project (Racer) and these one shot clops are basically coming out while you are either at a road block or bored with racer.  Out of your stories only a handful of have more than one chapter and a couple have a sequel that's essentially ch. 2 of the prequel.   For some reason out of all your stories your button mash story is the most popular and the longest other than racer.  

I can't tel if they are in the same universe but it has potential for a longer story as do several others.  Question is why leave them as one shots and not devote more time to them?  

Your recent luna story while just straight clip has potential for character development but ends.  

Honestly I'd like to see one of the more popular one shots become another multiple chapter fiction that you work on when you can and want and not be a chore.  Anyway my thoughts take it or ignore it.

#233 · 17w, 3d ago · · ·

For awesome story's

#232 · 22w, 6d ago · · ·

I miss you...

#231 · 29w, 1d ago · · ·

So is Spike's Sexy Surprise ever going to continue?

#230 · 36w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

>>1944621

Both of you; that's just exactly how I imagined the whole thing going down.

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