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Lucion is a stallion that kept to himself until he was asked to foalsit the cutie mark crusaders will he keep a secret from the active CMC.

This is a retry for CMC foalsitter I've gotten comments about poor thought so I'm adjusting that.

I forgot to mention this was when I first started writing.

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Comments ( 18 )

My idea was that he was um....uh..ugh:facehoof:

2467349 Alright just wait I'm going to fix it

So it's the concept of Stare Master, but with an OC instead.

Is he gonna go Mr. Popo on them? :pinkiecrazy:

2523989 huh never thought of it that way thanks for the explanation :twilightsmile:

2523989 do you like it Knighty?

2524056 no they will not go popo on them he isn't :pinkiecrazy: like that just a changeling nothing to make him go full on popo :coolphoto: sorry

2530245 Your lies will not come unpunished. My face is the last thing you'll see Knightly *gun shot*

Foalsiting the CMC? This can't end well. I will try this sometime.

2693491 I hope you like it this was my first approved story. I know what you are thinking though but I am not exhalent at writing and sorry if you don't like it.

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English was not my first language but thank to fan fiction reading it is one of my best subjects.
Even if I don't like this I will know that you will improve. Looking at the original chapters of my first story and I can only laugh.

2693558 Yeah I was terrible on creative writing now I am improving.

2693558 Please tell me if you like it.

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The thing is, I have more then 90 different Fallout Equestria stories on my plate. I have not even opened this story yet.

2723154 I was meaning when you have time.

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Looks like not only some of the ponies I read about is missing thinking they lack inteligence.
I really am not clever.

I will try.

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