Rarity is slightly concerned at Sweetiebelle’s education, especially with what she has been coming out with recently, she confines in Twilight, who comes up with a genius idea: using a new spell that makes her a filly! Twilight decides to go undercover, to really see what Cheerilee teaches at the school. However Twilight finds out not only has school changed a lot from her time, but it seems she had the best education ever. Much to the annoyance to the ponies at Ponyville School. Can Twilight try not being so much of an egg head for just one day?
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Really great story. Here have a
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School Daze - WASP
You need s bit better description, sentance structure and grammer corrections, but otherwise its a decent story.
Get someone else to edit the story. Otherwise a nice story.
That was good, I really liked the idea of Twilight going undercover as a filly, as Luna would say 'Twas most amusing'
This was entertaining read! I would suggest you separate the fillies names, I notice you write them as SweetieBelle instead of Sweetie Belle.
Found this story by chance and except for some typo, the story is not bad. Not many like this.