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kaidanXD


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Twilight Sparkle always studies the movement of the stars. But one night she finds a series of errors in her note taking. These errors seem nothing at first, however these turn out to be clues to future events that put the very lives of other ponies in danger.

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This...

sums up my reaction.

This is...THIS IS...AWESOME! Good guy! I'm assuming you hate Twilight too? :pinkiehappy:

That was not an ending, it was a cop-out.

Good writing though.

The ending was weak, but it was pretty good other than that.

The story was great. But i found the end sort of weak. Maybe if you elaborate a little it would help me understand. But other than the ending i liked it.

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