The Letter

After yet another failed attempt at getting their cutie mark the ~~Cutie Mark Crusaders~~ Cutie Mark Crusader finds herself writing a letter to Celestia about what she learned about friendship and it's flaws.

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Jlargent

Jlargent #1 · Jul 3rd, 2013 · · · The Letter ·

Sincerely your fateful subject Scootaloo

It should be "Faithful" instead.

The Crusaders

The Crusaders #2 · Jul 3rd, 2013 · · · The Letter ·

This makes me so sad, I would be horribly depressed if that actually had happened, Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom both love me though

~Scootaloo

Nevdar

Nevdar #3 · Jul 3rd, 2013 · · · The Letter ·

It's an interesting concept and quite sad. But I think that if you expanded on this it would make it a lot better, cause as it os , we have nothing to base this story off of. Like how did sweetie belle and applebloom die. Or Celestias recation to the letter. I also feel that spike was a bit out of character and inconsiderate. Spike knowing what happened, would not have said one word in complaint. Also maybe look for an editor to help with grammar and such. Just a few helpful tips. This story has potential to be more than a one shot story. But regardless, this is a good story and it touched my heart. Keep up the good work.

Comment posted by Moniker deleted Jul 3rd, 2013

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