(highly recommend watching the Xionic Madness series for a better context of Omega and everything about him)The leader of the tippy-top team of soldiers in the world, Omega the cyborg, was finally dead, killed by his former team mate Kary-08, a fully sentient android, even when he regains consciousness, he is now in... hell? He thought that's where he would end up, at least in some mildly charred rip-off of hell, but no, now he is in the land of Equestria, a utopia ruled by ponies and peace, and he's been through so much, he's more than willing to accept both. He is cripplingly cautious though, years on the battlefield have taught him that even in the brightest light, there is darkness, yet while nothing threatens him, he can't feel safe. Stripped of his powerful bio-mech armor, he finds himself feeling naked, despite his new companions and under-armor clothing, and puts his mind to it's greatest use, science, and it's least used use, friendship. Rated for Omega being a vulgar person and other stuff later on
dont know what eveyone else will think but i like it
I was actually a bit curious at to what would happen if this cyborg killer would find himself in Equestria.
That being said,keep writing.
Well, its a good thing Omega ended up here and not Zero...he would have likely killed everyone and cursed like a sailor the entire time, injuries or not.
This is gonna bs good @,@
Hmmm...Not bad. Not bad at all. I'm a huge fan of the Xionic Madness series so I'm very interested in seeing where this will go.
There is one thing I feel the need to bring up though. You went about explaining what exactly is on Omega's to do list about 3 separate times. And the way you explained just how he was the second smartest member of Bolverk Squad came off as kind of forced.
Other than that I think this is a pretty good start to an interesting fic. I look forward to seeing more.
I can tell you right now... If I see more of this be damned fiction... I'm gonna hug you for making such a wonderful thing.
ok me gusta
So, awkward start, but I just needed to force this story out of the harbor and into the sea of events, next chapter coming soon, I love all of you for liking my story so far, being an author is a bit tough but it is rewarding.
- Lord P1
Another Madness (based) crossover? Yes please :D
Progressing into amnesia eh?
Poor old Omega :(
Holy crap after watching the entire xionic videos I say master chief would never stand a chance against something like him. Anyways I love this story very much please update daily or every two days if possible.
2200229 amnesia? ha. ha ha. ha ha ha, ha, no, something less interesting but more meaningful, next chapter will explain
2200356 images.wikia.com/xionicmadness/images/0/0d/179106_lolomega.jpg : oh, him? I would dominate in a CQC fight, he might try to knife me, but my armor can block anything weaker than 12.7mm diameter rounds and explosives, in a gun fight, my custom-arms would be devastating, while his flimsy military issued arms wouldn't do much more than slow me down, I'm not sure on his caliburs, though, I could be wrong.
Could use a lil work,the conversations feel a little bit rushed....
Dang, Omega works quick, He's gone and built a battery from scratch in, what, 2 days?
That's cyborgs for ya :P
2204220 honestly, it was because I was trying a style where you only say who said something the first time, and since it's a back and forth conversation, it's easy to tell who says what if you pay attention
2204239 actually, he already had a battery in his body, that's what powered his body, and was a back-up for his armor battery, but it was broken during the fight with Kary, so he had to repair it, but he didn't have any lithium, a key component in high capacity energy cells, so, repaired a broken battery in 6 days, 6 days have gone by
next chapter coming soon
2204759 Right-O
I guess I should watch the Xionic series again :P
No offence, but the dialogue seems a bit bland and unreactive.
Like how when Omega shot Gilda and Twilight was like "Eh, she deserves to be shot by those extremely dangerous weapons you just told me about"
Let me put it this way about your story......IT'S FUCKING AWESOME.
2207955 you have no idea how happy that makes me, not only to really see the 'Twilight's Grudge' instead of a visualization, but to know that someone cares enough to do that, I'll give you an honor. That honor can be redeemed when I think of something to honor you with.
This chapter was much better :D
Description: A double ended sword (One blade above, one blade underneath, grip in the middle) with extendable blades, so it can be used as a normal sword with one blade, a super fly double ended sword, or a hittin' stick :D
(Two buttons to extend / retract the blades)
Name: Retracter.
Blades: about 2 and a half feet long each, not curved and super sharp.
Weight: 10 Kg
Based on: a sword :|
OH OH!
I got one!
Name: Shockwave
Category: Launcher
Calibur: Fires custom-made electrically charged 25mm grenades
Weight: 6.35 kg (14 lb)
Specifications: Looks very similar to the XM25 grenade launcher but with several glowing red lights on the barrel and a dull red coloring on the stock.
Alternate fire: The grenade can be detonated in midair creating a small field of electricity which can be used to electrocute several enemies at once at the cost of less damage to each enemy.
Based on: XM25 CDTE grenade launcher
Hey, I'm enjoying the story so far and I have weapon idea { several actually}. The Ragnarok. It's designed to be a devastating short to mid range weapon with three shot options. The shot options are as follows scatter{ akin to shotgun} rail { fires a beam concentrated to punch through cover, but also use more charge} and area { which is more like a Flamer}. The beauty of the weapon is that it doesn't need ammo, it only needs to charge from the sun or moon { which in it's self gives new interesting options} however if the charge becomes depleted, it will serve little other purpose until charged once more. The weapon if charged by the sun has the following two capabilities fire which will burn continue to harm the target or flare which will also burn the target but at a much less harming effect, the main effect of flare is to knock target out with sensory overload. If the weapon is charged by the moon it has the following capabilities, ice the weapon will fire shards of ice capable of doing gruesome damage { area option causes it to fire a fine mist that will freeze the target, much like liquid nitrogen}, the second option is more chaotic in nature but let's call it the Jabber effect, { called so for reference to Alice in Wonderland monster Jabberwocky} the Jabber effect seems to change effects for all types of targets{ except one species but we do not know why} the effects could harm the target or even baffling stronger. The only thing that seems to experience the same effect each time is unicorns in which the weapon will not harm the target but rather prevent them from using their magic and reflecting it on to themselves. The weapon is 16.8 pounds making it unwieldy for long marches, but since you do not need to keep additional ammo it makes up for it. The weapon is extremely hardy, not needing maintenance for long periods and when it is need it is usually a small matter. {sidenote} Close quarters combat is more than an option as it's weight and durability makes it possible.Please tell me what you think and also I'm sorry for writing a wall of text but when I get inspired it's hard to stop.
Alright { sorry but I have many weapon ideas and since you're asking for means to cause mass destruction, I'm more than happy to be of assistance}
1. The Black Hole Generator= A small grenade that when used causes a small contained black hole to pull everything in it's effective radius to be destroyed. There is no worry of it destroying the world as it destroys itself in one nano second and it wouldn't be able to reach anything out of range. It weighs about roughly 6 pounds { which for a grenade is heavy, but the destruction it brings usually means you only need 1 or 2.
It's shaped much like the German grenade used in WW2 { also known as the potato masher}, the handle on the grenade allows it to be thrown at a much more effective range. The explosive part itself is a matte black and designed to allow for more aerodynamics.
The converter= As much a tool as it is a weapon. The converter when used on a target can cause the target to shift into a number of useful ores. One unfortunate drawback is if target is already made of a kind of ore { Trolls, Golems, or any constructs} it will not work and also if the target that was hit and converted cannot be changed back so please be aware of friendly fire. The converter is a scatter gun by design, with a pump-action loader, pistol grip, with a detachable stock, and a color coordinator to show what ore selection for shot display.
Omega is making good progress, strengthening his emotions, getting weapons, and above all else
Making the ponies more comfortable with killing
*SPOILER* it's part of the ponies' initiations */SPOILER*
Ladies and Gentlemen, allow me to reintroduce:
Omega, the walking tank/arsenal/death machine
Also I have to say, I like your version of the Shockwave better. Mine was kinda impractical in hindsight.
2221460 *LE GASP* INITIATIONS!?
2221585 well it was still a great idea nonetheless
2221623 yeah, initiations, *SPOLER* let's just say that Bio Int is in Equestria */SPOILER*
He Ponified himself?!
That makes me a bit cross >:(
Anyone else betting that all of the mane six are going to be joining the new Bolverk squad?
Let me guess he made a pony clone of himself.
2227676 *DING DING DING* you win, he did, his mind was so focused on deciding between ponifying himself and making a clone of himself, but magic isn't like technology, magic heeds to your thoughts without being told to, so yes, he made a clone of himself and that clone is a pony
2227672 *LE GASP* I bet 15 terabytes that they will (lol Omega quote)
Dude wtf. This is kinda getting out of hand. Next thing we know zero comes and starts effing stuff up. Hope Celesta puts a stop to this cause basically omega is CORRUPTING THEM ALL.
HOLY SHIT
DID THAT SERIOUSLY JUST HAPPEN?!
Did Omega and the girls seriously murder someone, chop them up, hide the body, then just pretend it didn't happen?!
.........
That's awesome.
Rainbow decapitated her mum?...
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I mean, That's pretty out of character for the Element of Loyaly :|
SO AWESOME!!
2232776 *Xero
2233189 her mind has been influenced by Omega's presence and actions, in an Omega-less scenario, Rainbow Dash would have less-than-politely declined, but she was mad, after all, one WOULD be mad if their single mother said that they would end up as a desperate drug addicted cum rag
*THIS WILL NOT ACTUALLY HAPPEN* Omega is having a big influence on everypony, next thing you know, the Mane 6 will assume the roles they held in gore-fics, Celestia will be a trolling whore, and Luna will rule Equestria alone. */THIS WILL NOT ACTUALLY HAPPEN*
Next chapter, Omega meets the CMC, shenanigans ensue shortly after.
"Everyone! *pulls out Obliterator* JUST CALM THE FUCK DOWN!" Lord P1 says, his 10 foot tall form holding the large acid gatling gun with ease.
The chapter schedule goes as follows: even numbered chapters are weapon name chapters, and they feature some of the dark stuff, odd number chapters are intel chapters, and they are very peaceful compared to the weapon name chapters.
This is a weapon name chapter, shit happened.
Next will be an intel chapter, no shit will happen but it'll be great, trust me.
Dis is da shit man!
Keep at it.
Meanwhile at the base of Canterlot Mountain lies the charred remains of a certain snobby prince.
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Nice, but did you have to say that 3 times?
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Don't you just love it when your internet decides to spaz out?
Omega does not simply give out his beloved rifles.
Ever.
A tree crashed to a tree-house...
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