Portgas D. Ace son of the late pirate king Gol D. Roger has spent his last couple months looking for Marshall D. Teach for breaking one of the Whitebeard Pirate's core rules. His search had taken him to many places and he had even met some old faces along the way, until one day he had caught up with Teach and the result of their fight would send Ace's life spinning before him and send him on an adventure he never saw coming.
Ace in equestria, might add some tags later depending on where this goes.
rated teen for violence and stuff
left the other character tag cause from what I have thought up this story doesn't have an end the in foreseeable future, lots of arcs and stuff yo, to much characters
Also if you thumbs down I'd appreciate an explanation in the comments
ya know, i wonder if Ace will ever take advantage if his fire form to actually shapeshift?
or stretch? or fly? grow, shrink, e.t.c?
7263152 Would that even be possible? I mean canonically speaking.
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probably.
smoker does the stretchy bit, and hes a logia with similar powers.
plus, Sabo can fly with it., he used it in the fight against Vergo
anyway, as for the shrinking and growing, compress the flames, or make more flames and make his body out of that.
shapeshifting, a logia can regrow from being cut in half, one with more control could probably reform the flames and his body at will.
I'm curious to read more.
7263356 This pleases me.
This intrigues Us.
MORE
7264855 Workin on it, bout a fourth of the way done maybe
7265667 Alright, thanks for taking an interest in my story
7265776 I'll try not to disappoint and thanks
7265866 I'll keep that in mind whenever I get stuck down the line
7265901 None taken, I know for a fact that my writing skills may not be up to par with the average story you'll find on this site but that's why I'm doing this, gotta get better also cause I've only ever found a handful of One Piece stories I've liked
7265938 Definitely, i wasn't necessarily depressed before i was pulled into the fandom but when i think about how i would be had i not joined all i could think of was worse than my current situation which isn't all that bad
This was good, but one thing...
PINKIE IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO BREAK THE 4TH WALL!!!!
7268163 Well I'm glad to know that most of the chapter was to your liking.
7275457 Well damn, dunno where I got 300,000 from but thanks for the correction. Changing it now
The Elements exorcised the Mera Mera no Mi didn't they? They are Called Devil Fruits for a reason and the not being able to go into water would probably be considered enough of a curse for the Elements to get rid of it.
7294165 Looks like we'll just have to wait and find out
7320065 Yeah sorry about this these last two weeks have been hectic, I should have the next chapter up tomorrow at one point. Might upload closer to the end of the day cause I'm gonna try to make it longer than normal to make up for the wait.
Edit: I don't know when the next chapter will be up, I'm trying to write it right now but I don't wanna force it and muck things up. At this point I'd say its about halfway done. Sorry for the wait on this guys.
7323629 Heh well the next one is up. I ended up not being able to make it double the length because i figured why make up wait with more wait
I hope to see the hilarious annoyance the mane 6 will have when they see Ace's little trait
So I'm not entirely sure if it will be noticed now but i felt that Tia's side of the conversation in the end was really lackluster. anyway i went back and wrote some more lines in and tried making it better.
Ace...you really need to see somepony about narcolepsy issue.
The best part is hands down the ending
And there it is!
Ace allowed an element blast, wtf?
For people that are either here looking for updates or reading it the first time around I'd like to say thank you for taking an interest in my story. With that out of the way I have a bit of unfortunate news, I am currently broke so I won't be able to pay my cellphone bill or my WiFi bill and I don't know how long it'll be until I can. Don't worry too much though, I'm not giving up on my story I just won't be able to update until sometime later. Anyway thanks again, I'll try and get this resolved asap but I'm sure we all know how bad finding a job can be with no experience. See you all later.
I like it
very Good Story :)
Ah that ending was what I was waiting for.
7588674 Couldn't leave that out of the story. Still feel like I made it bit too dramatic though
that comes from alabasta... right?
7663216 Indeed it does, but it's been seen in various other scenes that he'll spontaneously nap while eating
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do you still plan to continue this story? please say yes
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I do plan on continuing but it's beyond slow going, back to the fact that I have no idea where I was originally taking this story I've been trying to find long term goals to reach in it and I haven't had much luck. While I originally didn't fancy the idea of brainstorming with people reading the story I might consider a certain few that have already asked after this long a silence. Honestly I don't exactly know if I'd get back much readers but I'm still working on it that much I can assure you.
Good start. But the video is sadly a no go to see
DAng it Garp your Narcolepsy rubbed off on your grandkids.
I think I get the concept behind this storyline. Interesting. Very interesting indeed